Author Topic: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition  (Read 2170203 times)

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2110 on: September 26, 2007, 04:07:14 am »
Hey Susie,

CONGRATULATIONS

to your 2000 posts!


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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2111 on: September 26, 2007, 06:38:16 am »
Just wanted to let everyone know that I'll be going camping tomorrow, Sept. 26, and I'll be back on Saturday, Sept. 29.  I'm going to Yosemite of course, and I'll be staying at Curry Village.

I'll be thinking of y'all.  And I'll tell you all about my adventure when I get back.

Love,
Gary

P.S.  I hope to find some really hot reunion stories when I get back, filled with very specific details.  I want to read about grunts and moans and body fluids.   ;D  This is their reunion, folks, and they've not done it in years.  So make it nasty.   :laugh:


How good that you go there by bus! ;D





Hope you are lucky and see a bear!
Love ya,
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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2112 on: September 26, 2007, 09:45:32 am »
Congratulations, Susiebell, on your two thousandth post. You wild woman!

Love the slide show of Jake. Sheee-it, that feller sure is foxy! How's about giving Heath a little equal time?
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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2113 on: September 26, 2007, 01:53:50 pm »
CONGRATULATIONS ON 2000 POSTS SUSIE!!
Glad we could all celebrate your milestone with you - particularly Jake!   ;D


And, thank you for your recent Siesta Motel installments! HOT HOT HOT! That's exactly how I imagined it too - an initial, lusty session followed by more at a slower and more intimate pace. I agree with Gary, let's continue to fill in the gaps!
Six-word Stories:  ~Jack: Lightning Flat, lightning love, flat denied   ~Ennis: Open space: flat tire, tire iron?

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2114 on: September 26, 2007, 02:53:27 pm »
You guys don´t mind me going a step back again, do you?

On the Way by Dagi

Jack steered and shifted with his left hand, not willing to let go of Ennis's hand, now that he finally got hold of him.

They didn't utter a word, what just had happened was beyond talking, they merely shot quick glances at each other, moaning low each time they locked eyes, impossible to ignore the hot jolts running through their bodies, their rock hard cocks speaking volumes.

Ennis shivered, squeezed Jack's fingers hard, then brought them to his lips and kissed them tenderly.


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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2115 on: September 26, 2007, 06:58:46 pm »
You guys don´t mind me going a step back again, do you?

On the Way by Dagi

Jack steered and shifted with his left hand, not willing to let go of Ennis's hand, now that he finally got hold of him.

They didn't utter a word, what just had happened was beyond talking, they merely shot quick glances at each other, moaning low each time they locked eyes, impossible to ignore the hot jolts running through their bodies, their rock hard cocks speaking volumes.

Ennis shivered, squeezed Jack's fingers hard, then brought them to his lips and kissed them tenderly.


No, we don't mind at ALL Dagi! You captured what I wondered about - what transpired in the truck when they were finally alone, before they got to the motel? They were so both overwhelmed, their loving, nonverbal gestures said it all. Beautiful, just beautiful! Thank you.
Six-word Stories:  ~Jack: Lightning Flat, lightning love, flat denied   ~Ennis: Open space: flat tire, tire iron?

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2116 on: September 26, 2007, 07:27:13 pm »
Just wanted to let everyone know that I'll be going camping tomorrow, Sept. 26, and I'll be back on Saturday, Sept. 29.  I'm going to Yosemite of course, and I'll be staying at Curry Village.

I'll be thinking of y'all.  And I'll tell you all about my adventure when I get back.

Love,
Gary

P.S.  I hope to find some really hot reunion stories when I get back, filled with very specific details.  I want to read about grunts and moans and body fluids.   ;D  This is their reunion, folks, and they've not done it in years.  So make it nasty.   :laugh:

Gary, are you going to offer the sweet life to someone on your camping trip!?  :D Anyway, sounds like fun! And, how come you didn't tell us you have a BIRTHDAY coming up?! We will all have to get in line to spank you for that one! 
Six-word Stories:  ~Jack: Lightning Flat, lightning love, flat denied   ~Ennis: Open space: flat tire, tire iron?

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Re: September 24: Third Party
« Reply #2117 on: September 26, 2007, 11:35:47 pm »
September 24th: Third Party by BBM-Cat

She fixed her hair, put on a dab of lip color, and one of her better dresses to meet Ennis’ friend from Texas; a reddish-orange, one-piece knit, matching the reddish highlights in her hair. It was also a bit clingy, showcasing her feminine breasts. Alma was very excited to think they were going on a social outing, and with a Texas gentleman. She couldn’t remember the last time she and Ennis had gone out together, much less taken a guest out to eat. She planned to suggest the Knife and Fork to Ennis.

Alma thought Ennis was behaving particularly nervous. She’d never seen him down so many beers and chain-smoke in such a short period of time. He sat staring out the window as if compelling his friend to materialize. Alma realized she didn’t know much about Ennis’ friend. She wanted to ask Ennis, but he didn’t look like he wanted to be bothered with a bunch of questions or with small-talk. He was also getting rather drunk. The afternoon dragged on. Jenny was getting hungry. It didn’t look like Ennis’ friend Jack was going to show after all. By late afternoon, her suggestion of going to the Knife and Fork was rejected.

Alma felt rejected too. She finished feeding the last bites of Jenny’s dinner at the table. She was silently brooding about not getting to go out. It seemed things always had to be Ennis’ way. Just in case, Alma decided not to change out of her dress so that she could still look her best if Ennis’ friend arrived. And maybe Ennis would change his mind. Alma got up to clear the dishes from the table. She heard Ennis jump up and bolt out of the apartment door. Alma thought that maybe she too should go outside to greet Ennis’ friend, though it was certainly more proper to bring a guest to the door.

Alma put the last of the dishes in the sink and dried her hands on a kitchen towel. Making her way over to the apartment door, she wondered why Ennis had not yet brought his friend up to meet her. She opened the inner door of the apartment, expecting to see Ennis barging up the steps with his friend, or to hear their boisterous greetings. Instead, it was strangely quiet. She put her hand on the screen door. She stopped suddenly, after pushing it open with a slight creak.

Completely stunned, Alma could see Ennis in the far stairwell with a man in a red shirt. A cowboy hat lay on the ground. They were pressed up tightly against each other, Ennis' shirt untucked, hands touching each other's faces, kissing passionately. She didn’t want to look, but at the same time, she couldn’t tear her eyes away. She wasn’t exactly sure what she saw. She knew she didn't want them to see her. Alma thought that maybe if she crept back quietly into the apartment, the images would go away, though the sudden sickening feeling in the pit of her stomach did not.


BBM-Cat, I'm delighted you gave us a tale from Alma's POV!  It is only fitting.  And so descriptive and well written!  Sad, too.  Poor Alma.  In one second her world was turned upside down!  Lovely work, BBM-Cat!

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Re: September 24th, A Few Minutes Later
« Reply #2118 on: September 26, 2007, 11:36:26 pm »
Marie, I love the details in this one - that either thought the other looked like a million bucks, that you call them lovers before they even kissed, the nuzzling.... love it!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi, sweets!

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Re: September 24th, Late Afternoon
« Reply #2119 on: September 26, 2007, 11:38:08 pm »
What a buildup, Littlewing!  And isn't it telling the way Ennis rushes past his wife without seeing her.  When he grabs Jack he looks around to make sure no one can see.  But he really doesn't look behind him.  He knows, or should know that Alma might be watching.  Could he subconsciously want Alma to see?

Gary

Thsnks for your kind words, Gary.  I think Ennis did want Alma to see them.  Or he was just too excited to care!  :-\