Author Topic: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition  (Read 2170834 times)

Offline Luvlylittlewing

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2530 on: November 03, 2007, 04:50:51 pm »
For certain things, yes!  ;D And since Gary sent me a ruler I even know what 7 and a half inches looks like!  :laugh:

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Re: You gotta teach me that one!
« Reply #2531 on: November 03, 2007, 04:51:36 pm »
What a cute good-night-tale, Marie! Thank you so much for this beautiful image of Ennis and Jack, dancing and smiling happily in the rain....that warms my heart!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!

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Re: You gotta teach me that one!
« Reply #2532 on: November 03, 2007, 04:52:19 pm »
Very sexy and beautiful, Littlewing.  One sentence stood out for me.  He taught Ennis to dance, but Jack was also very good at teaching Ennis to love.  That's very true.  I don't think Ennis would have ever known what love is had it not been for Jack Twist.

Gary

Thanks so much, Gary!

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Re: You gotta teach me that one!
« Reply #2533 on: November 03, 2007, 09:22:51 pm »
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He taught Ennis to dance, but Jack was also very good at teaching Ennis to love.  One sudden, violent shudder and Jack was done.  He fell over Ennis’ lap, hoping for a moment to rest.  But Ennis, fast learner that he was, had other ideas…

Marie, you never cease to amaze! i don't where you derive so many imaginative tales. This is such beautiful imagery. Maybe you outta ditch that nine to five and become a writer. There's gotta be money in saucy fanfiction, right?
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Re: You gotta teach me that one!
« Reply #2534 on: November 04, 2007, 09:40:25 pm »
Marie, you never cease to amaze! i don't where you derive so many imaginative tales. This is such beautiful imagery. Maybe you outta ditch that nine to five and become a writer. There's gotta be money in saucy fanfiction, right?


Thanks, Toycoon!  I'm just glad you had the vision to encourage our creative sides.  Who knows?  One day I may write something for profit.  And if I do, I'll have you and the others here to thank!  You guys are the greatest!  :-*

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Re: Admiring the View
« Reply #2535 on: November 04, 2007, 09:41:34 pm »
Thanks LittleBaby!  :-* I have NO idea what I've been yakking on about!  I have GOT to learn to shut up!!   :-X ;D

Susie   

 

Don't ever shut up, SusieBaby!  Please don't!  :-*  :)

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Re: You gotta teach me that one!
« Reply #2536 on: November 04, 2007, 09:43:17 pm »
Ah, wonderful sexy romp littlewing!!  I just love the thought of them dancing about in the rain and then drying each other off!  Hmmm Hmmmm Hmmmmmmmm !

Susie   


Thanks, SusieHoney!  It's good to write sexy, romantic fic.  I like the scary stuff, too, but I missed writing the warm and fuzzy tales.

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Re: The Hunter
« Reply #2537 on: November 05, 2007, 11:13:24 pm »
Hey Dagi dear, How about a porn-with-no-plot story just for you?  I miss them  ;D  and I miss you  :-*

 


The Hunter by Susiebell

Ennis searched through the forest for Jack, visions of the previous night racing across his mind; kneeling over Jack’s sweaty naked body, grasping his slim firm hips, spreading his smooth white buttocks wide apart.  Jack was around here somewhere, he’d seen him head off in this direction, and he needed him now.   He spotted him just a short distance ahead, collecting firewood, whistling absentmindedly to himself.

Ennis was on him like a wolf attacking its prey.  Jack didn’t know what had hit him, flung against the trunk of a tree, lips pressed hard on him, tongue prising his mouth open.  Ennis’ hips ground painfully against his, fumbling fingers soon had his jeans open and pulled down to his ankles, Ennis falling to his knees, mouth enveloping his cock, sucking hard, devouring him hungrily.

Strong arms twisted him around and rammed him up against the tree, legs spread apart, Ennis’ angry cock throbbing against his backside.  A sharp pain as Ennis forced his way in, gave way to waves of pleasure, matching the rhythmic pumping from behind.  Jack was so close, moaning loudly, Ennis’ teeth sinking into his neck, fucking him hard.  Grunting and groaning, breath coming in heavy and ragged, two loud cries echoed through the trees and both men collapsed to the ground.





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Beautiful, just beautiful!  So very sexy and hot!  This is the sort of passion that is typical of our boys.  Lovely writing, my dear!

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2538 on: November 05, 2007, 11:15:12 pm »
I just got a PM from Dagi.  She's feeling under the weather to put it mildly.  Tummy problems and a couple of other things.  She's staying in bed mostly, and doesn't feel up to visiting our thread here right now.  But she wanted me to send you all her love.

Gary

Oh, I'm sorry to hear this.  Dagi, please feel better soon.  We won't feel right without you here! 

Get well soon, our dear sweet Dagi!

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #2539 on: November 05, 2007, 11:16:30 pm »
Hurry up and get better Dagi baby!

Here's a little something to cheer you up .....



                       


Love Susie    



Wow!  I don't know about Dagi, but this series of pics sure do help lift my spirits!  Thanks so much for the pics, SusieBaby!