Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition

[Luvlylittlewing]

Hey kids,
I'm sorry to hear that everyone has various illnesses including Post-Holiday Depression, Tonsillitis, The Flu or Good Old Fashioned General Stress. I hope everyone recuperates soon enough.
Love,
Toycoon

One of these days, I'm gonna create another BetterMost Craft project for y'all. I've been crazy busy lately and I can't seem to bring myself to do work more after working all day!

P.S. I'm digging the maleimagegallery. Thanks girls, for bringing it to my attention!

Thanks, Toycoon!  A new craft project sounds heavenly!

[cwby30]

Evenin', littlewing.

Well, damn sad for Jack, Ennis taking off without saying a word.     Not like him, not after he's come so far to find Jack.  Think something happened, like Raquel, who won't take no for an answer.  Liked how Jack picked up the match that Ennis had used, and saved it.  Hope his Mom's prayers are answered, they need each other. 

But, now what??!!

Thanks again.

[Dagi]

Right 65 By Littlewing1957

“Relax, sweetie,” Mrs. Twist soothed as she grabbed hold of Jack’s forearm.  She learned from her earlier worrying spell when she thought Jack and Ennis has disappeared.  There was just no need to get all worked up, especially when things always worked out.  “You say you guys were out in the back just awhile ago?”  Jack nodded.  Mrs. Twist tightened her grip on Jack’s forearm, as he was shaking.  “Easy, son,” She began.  “Why don’t you go on out back and look for your friend. I’m sure he just stepped away for a bit…probably looking around..real curious like!”  Yeah, stepped away, carrying all his stuff with him! Jack thought, ruefully.  But in order to satisfy his mother and himself, Jack agreed to look around out back for Ennis.  “I’ll be back in a bit,” Jack whispered to his mom.  He nodded politely to Katie and headed to the back of the shop.  “I should go with him?” Katie asked Mrs. Twist.  “No, please,” Mrs. Twist answered.  She took Katie’s hand and held it tight. “Let him go on.  He can handle this!”

Jack moved quickly through Katie’s apartment.  He averted his eyes.  He didn’t want to see the place that he almost shared with his good friend.  When Jack reached the back door he flung it open and moved outside.  The only sign that Ennis had been there at all was the burned out match that he lit earlier.  It was still on the ground and looked insignificant and lonesome among the yellow leaves, small rocks.  Jack knelt down and picked up the used match from the near frozen earth.  He turned it over in nervous fingers and examined the burned out tip.  “Ennis, how could you leave without me?”  Jack rose to a standing position and felt weak as he experienced every emotion starting with anger and progressing to shock, ending with loneliness.  He placed the used match carefully in his jacket pocket and took a cursory glance around the grounds.  “If this is the way you want it, cowboy..” Jack mumbled.  He shook his head and walked back into the shop.

Mrs. Twist and Katie were talking, were very deep in conversation when Jack walked into the store.  The two women stopped abruptly and faced Jack with expectant looks on their faces.   “Well?”  It was Mrs. Twist.  “I didn’t find him.  He’s gone.”  Jack stated without emotion.  Mrs. Twist held her breath.  Katie sucked her teeth.  “Well,” Mrs. Twist began, “It looks like Ennis has some things to work out on his own.  I’m sure he’ll return.”  Jack nodded, but he wasn’t so sure.  “I had plans for the rest of the afternoon, but in light of what has just happened, I think we better go home.” Mrs. Twist moved closer to her son. “I’ll serve you some of that pot roast I cooked earlier.  What you say, son?”  Jack didn’t want to go back to the ranch.  He didn’t know what he wanted at that point.  But he didn’t have a lot of options.  “Okay mom, I’ll go home with you.  Just let me have a few minutes with Katie in private, and then we’ll catch a cab home.”  Mrs. Twist nodded and headed for the door.  “There is a cab always parked over by the donut shop, ma.  Go have one wait for us.”  Mrs. Twist smiled and walked out.  Katie moved to her desk at the back of the store and pretended to read over a few receipts.  She was devastated that Ennis had run off without a word to anyone.  And now Jack was about to take his leave!  Katie was warming up to the idea of having two gorgeous men around.  And what would she tell Raquel?  Jack approached Katie’s desk and glared down at her with an expression that was impossible to read.  “Katie, I..” Jack began, but she cut him off.  "Its okay, Jack,” she spoke sincerely. “I understand.”  Jack hung his head and was silent. “Look, if you ever need to use my little apartment, don’t hesitate to ask.  And if Ennis comes back here, I’ll get word to you.” “Thank you kindly,” was all that Jack could manage.  Katie looked up into Jack’s baby blues. “You’ll let me know when and if he comes back?” Jack nodded mournfully and headed for the door. “Will do, Katie!  Thanks for everything!” “No problemo!” She offered. “See you in church.”  Jack tried on a smile for her sake and left the shop.

He found his mom seated in a cab right in front of the shop.  Jack climbed in beside her and the cabbie drove off.  Jack looked at his mom as she sat stiff, looking suddenly older than her years.  Jack felt a tug of tenderness when he observed his mother.  He hated to see his mom with a worried face and a rigid demeanor.  Jack reached over and took his mother’s hand and they rode in silence for the most part.  Jack couldn’t wrap his mind around what just happened.  He shook his head to keep out the thoughts and images that threatened to intrude: sweet mental pictures of Ennis walking across a stream; Ennis laughing at one of his bad jokes; Ennis pulling him close.  Jack couldn’t avoid the image of Ennis asleep on his living room couch, just a few days ago.  He remembered romance, passion, even love.  Jack knew he had to pull himself together, but he feared he was coming apart.  When the cabbie pulled up to the house, Jack paid him and helped his mother onto the property.  Jack allowed her to take his arm, but when they were in view of the basement steps, Jack felt like his knees would buckle.  Mrs. Twist looked at her son and saw the tears in his eyes.  She spread her arms wide and folded her son in.  They must have looked a sight: the two of them there, swaying; Mrs. Twist patting, cooing, as silent tears ran down Jack’s miserable face.  As Mrs. Twist held her son, and as the tears continued to fall, she decided to do what she always did in situations like these – Mrs. Twist began to pray.  She rocked Jack back and forth, all the while asking God to strengthen them both.  She prayed silently, as her entreaties couldn’t be uttered.

You have a talent for making me sad, Marie.    You write so beautifully, thank goodness Jack has his mother, and Roberta has her son, so they can hold each other.

I hope you are feeling better, baby. I think of you. Thanks so much for writing!

Love,
Dagi

[Dagi]

Thanks, Toycoon!  A new craft project sounds heavenly!

 

[Luvlylittlewing]

You have a talent for making me sad, Marie.    You write so beautifully, thank goodness Jack has his mother, and Roberta has her son, so they can hold each other.

I hope you are feeling better, baby. I think of you. Thanks so much for writing!

Love,
Dagi

Thanks, Dagi! 

[Luvlylittlewing]

Evenin', littlewing.

Well, damn sad for Jack, Ennis taking off without saying a word.     Not like him, not after he's come so far to find Jack.  Think something happened, like Raquel, who won't take no for an answer.  Liked how Jack picked up the match that Ennis had used, and saved it.  Hope his Mom's prayers are answered, they need each other. 

But, now what??!!

Thanks again.

Hey, there!  Thanks for your kind words.  I'm so glad to see you here!  Stay tuned for the next installment.  I have a feeling we're in store for a few surprises!

[Luvlylittlewing]

Closure? By Littlewing1957

Lureen hung up the phone and sat down on her expensive couch.  She just told Ennis Del Mar about the “accident,” and was exhausted from the effort.  Lureen held a newly manicured finger up to her painted eyes, looking for imperfections.  She loved her red nails.  Examining them was a way to calm herself.

Ennis said they was good friends, and that they was herding sheep up on Brokeback in ’63.  Lureen rubbed a well tended cuticle.  Jack never mentioned a job up on Brokeback Mountain, wherever the hell that may be.  And he certainly never talked about Ennis being such an old friend.  She refused to allow her mind to entertain such rude thoughts.  Jack was gone now.  Best to let him rest in peace.

Lureen looked at the phone as though it was radiating heat.  She needed desperately to talk to someone, but couldn’t think of any one who would understand.  She didn’t quite understand what had happened to her life.  The task of boxing up Jack’s things still loomed.  She couldn’t bring herself to begin the job, and wouldn’t let anyone else near his stuff.  But Ennis’ call jarred something within her.  Tomorrow she would remove all trace of Jack Twist from her life.  She hoped Ennis could give her husband the peace he deserved.  She hoped he could rest for eternity, up on Brokeback Mountain.

[Luvlylittlewing]

Hi there Littlewing and Toycoon.  I just finished reading your last four chapters.  You two are really building the suspense.  Where is Ennis?  Why would he leave without Jack?  I can't wait to find out.  And I sure hope they get back together in the end.

Gary

Hey, Gary!  I, too, can't wait to see what happens next! 

[Luvlylittlewing]

Beautiful poem, Littlewing.  And such a lovely thought, Jack and Ennis together forever.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  I'm felling rather inspired to write "verse."  I promised Dagi poetry, and I plan to deliver. 

[Luvlylittlewing]

Hi Littlewing.  I've been following the topic of the week thread, which asks people to give their opinions about Jack's death.  I've always been surprised when people say they think Lureen wasn't being honest on the phone with Ennis, or that she had something to do with his death.  I always got the impression that she was passing on a story that she assumed was true.  (Whether it is true or not is another matter.)  And it seemed to me that during the conversation she realizes certain things.  I think that something Ennis said helped her to figure out that Jack and Ennis were lovers.  Her demeanor certainly did change over the course of that phone conversation.  Something was going on inside her head.

Gary

I agree with everything you just said about Lureen.  To her credit, she was rather nice to Ennis, even after she began to realize that he and Jack were lovers.  I didn't expect that!