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Offline loneleeb3

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Re: Writings
« Reply #10 on: January 22, 2008, 03:22:49 pm »
I see you now in my rearview
growing smaller in my sight
The memories will fade
 like stars in twilight
Yet my broken heart will never mend
scarred and shattered till the end
Hapiness can't be measured in lentgh or heighth
The pain remains
while you grow smaller in my sight.
"The biggest obstacle to most of us achieving our dreams isn't reality, it's our own fear"

"Saint Paul had his Epiphany on the road to Damascus, Mine was on Brokeback Mountain"

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Re: Writings
« Reply #11 on: March 14, 2008, 03:50:01 pm »
Man of my dreams why are you so elusive yet?
I still remember that clear September night our eyes first met
My world was turned on it's axis
I've not recovered still
your hand in mine my heart on my sleeve
now winter's come and gone a distant memory
still, my heart beats on
I am the body, you are the life
My eyes have vision you are my sight
up ahead around the bend
when will the race ever end?
over moutains high and chasms deep
I search for you even in fitful sleep
stop running stop hiding tear down those stone walls
Come home to my heart where you belong.
"The biggest obstacle to most of us achieving our dreams isn't reality, it's our own fear"

"Saint Paul had his Epiphany on the road to Damascus, Mine was on Brokeback Mountain"

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Re: Writings
« Reply #12 on: July 08, 2008, 09:27:43 pm »
This is nice stuff, Lee, wow.

Why do i love
let me stop I pray


That reminds me of:

How do I love thee
let me count the ways


A lot of the stuff seems like song lyrics. Do you write music/songs?

I second that! Tell us more about your creative side, friend!
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