New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie

[louisev]

Yes believe it, I finally started a new Greenlea story.

The Rookie 

http://louisev.livejournal.com/236331.html#cutid1  Chapter 1

Since there seem to be two camps of readers, the Dupree camp and the Ellery camp, I decided I was going to satisfy both - so it will contain all of our major characters and not choose between them.

[MaineWriter]

And it's a great start, Louise. Thanks for the early Christmas present!

L

[louisev]

there will be another chapter up in a while.

[mariez]

I don't do this very often, but this definitely rates a

SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

Awesome start to the story, Louise!  You never lose your touch.  I love seeing the boys in action.

Count me as having one foot firmly in both camps (all the camps, really).  I love all the Greenlea boys. 

There's a foot of snow outside and it's freezing cold ....but now I'm having a great day!   

Thanks,
Marie

[louisev]

thanks, Marie!

I wasn't sure if I was going to get the ol Muse back or not, and it is just as much of a surprise to me as it is to you that here I am working on a story I had no inkling of previously.  It has a little of the old, and a little of the new in it, just enough to keep everybody guessing!

and here is the next chapter!

The Rookie, Chapter 2

http://louisev.livejournal.com/236640.html

[MaineWriter]

This is great, just like the old days....waiting for multiple chapters in one day. Thanks, Louise!

Yes, Marie, we have a foot of snow too, it's effing freezin as Ellery would say, and I am warm and toasty with The Rookie...

L

[louisev]

I have felt very bad about not giving anyone any new stories, and it is really enjoyable to see so many folks popping up gleefully to read the little start I have going here on 'The Rookie.'

[mariez]

....... and I am warm and toasty with The Rookie...

Yep, these boys are great warmer-uppers.   


SPOILERS





Are you sure you're not a lawyer, Louise?     That was excellent.  What a fascinating (and awful) web of corruption in Greenlea County.  Effin' Amos - but he's got some bargaining power and he knows it. 

Poor Dupree, being put in the middle of Ellery and Paula - but it shows just how highly Wes thinks of him.  Wow - Ellery was in rare form, but good on Paula for holding her own with him.  I think Ellery needs a spankin'   

And we see, once again, why Wes is the Sheriff and our Fearless Leader. 

Thanks!
Marie

[louisev]

I like to think I was a lawyer in another life.   

thanks for the comments, Marie, it instils confidence that at least I sound like I know what I'm talking about.

And you knew we couldn't see the last of Amos Marigold or that little troublemaker Leon - right?

[louisev]

Yes, it's up!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/236920.html  'The Rookie, Chapter 3'