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Offline louisev

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #20 on: December 18, 2007, 11:22:39 pm »
bonus chapter!  (I felt inspired.)

http://louisev.livejournal.com/237517.html  'The Rookie: Chapter 5'
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #21 on: December 19, 2007, 12:51:05 am »
Well-I know I've been on my best behavior Louise, so I will take that bonus chappie as my reward!  :)

I love how everyone is in Ellery's business about that coffee though! And Jeremy had to bust Ellery's stones with Wes about gettin' his licks from Colson. (Poor Wes-he's so tolerant but he's always walking into the middle of these uncomfortable conversations!)

Thanks Louise -these chapters were a great stress reliever after fighting evil Holiday Mall crowds tonight! (Bah Humbug.  >:()
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #22 on: December 19, 2007, 02:45:14 am »
Quote from: louise van hine on December 18, 2007, 10:09:53 pm
Okay you girls get half of what you asked for:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/237184.html  'The Rookie, Chapter 4'

Quote from: louise van hine on December 18, 2007, 11:22:39 pm
bonus chapter!  (I felt inspired.)

http://louisev.livejournal.com/237517.html  'The Rookie: Chapter 5'

OMG. Louise, I don't know what kind of medicine you're on, but keep taking it! LOL

*off to read*

 :)  :)  :)
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #23 on: December 19, 2007, 01:25:16 pm »
Well for better or for worse I'm not taking any medicine, and I an enjoying the positive pleasure of having my readers loyally back following the new story even if it is low on naughtiness!

And the good news for all of you is that next week I have two days off for the holiday and the following week for New Year"s Eve and New Year's day so I should have plenty of time to write as well.  Life has finally settled down enough to permit me to think about things like crime plots and creepy Amos Marigold.
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“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #24 on: December 19, 2007, 02:03:06 pm »
Looks like I went to bed too early last night!  An inspired Louise - with time off! - is a beautiful thing!   :)

SPOILERS






Ellery and Dupree make a great team at work.  I can't wait to see Ellery "using his discretion" with that snake Amos. 

It was great seeing Jeremy get official word on his well-deserved promotion.  It made me all gooey when his immediate reaction was to call Nick  (and out loud to Wes!).  Sweet Thing is the perfect nickname for him-he's so effin' adorable I can hardly stand it. 

Thanks for the bonus, Louise.  You're a doll!
Marie
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #25 on: December 19, 2007, 06:28:12 pm »
Quote from: louise van hine on December 19, 2007, 01:25:16 pm
Well for better or for worse I'm not taking any medicine, and I an enjoying the positive pleasure of having my readers loyally back following the new story even if it is low on naughtiness!
And the good news for all of you is that next week I have two days off for the holiday and the following week for New Year"s Eve and New Year's day so I should have plenty of time to write as well.  Life has finally settled down enough to permit me to think about things like crime plots and creepy Amos Marigold.

I don't know about anyone else, but I am officially naughty enough now to fill in the blanks myself!  ;)

Besides, I love these guys so much everyday life stuff & police action etc. keeps me perfectly content.

So glad to hear your real life has settled down for you though. Thanks again Louise!
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You're the love of my life
And the breath in my prayers
Take my hand, lead me there

I can't forget the taste of your mouth
From your lips the heavens pour out
I can't forget when we are one
With you alone I am free

~~Santana~~Love of My Life

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #26 on: December 19, 2007, 07:29:58 pm »
well, I'm not doing away with a lot of the explicit scenes lightly... it mainly has to do with maintaining the tone of the story, and I find that the tone changes a lot when there is an intimate scene, which works well sometimes but doesn't work as well when it"s more frequent!

at least that is how it feels to me.
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #27 on: December 19, 2007, 09:44:31 pm »
and here we are with today's episode !

http://louisev.livejournal.com/237733.html  'The Rookie:  Chapter 6'
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #28 on: December 20, 2007, 02:56:06 am »
Quote from: louise van hine on December 19, 2007, 09:44:31 pm
and here we are with today's episode !

http://louisev.livejournal.com/237733.html  'The Rookie:  Chapter 6'


 :o You're spoiling us Louise! And I love it!!!

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #29 on: December 20, 2007, 03:05:03 am »
Quote from: frantic65 on December 19, 2007, 06:28:12 pm
I don't know about anyone else, but I am officially naughty enough now to fill in the blanks myself!  ;)


 :laugh:

Aren't we all.... 8)

Quote from: frantic65 on December 19, 2007, 06:28:12 pm
Besides, I love these guys so much everyday life stuff & police action etc. keeps me perfectly content.

So glad to hear your real life has settled down for you though. Thanks again Louise!

Me too! Three cheers for Louise's muse  :)
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