Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1139297 times)

Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1170 on: July 06, 2006, 04:17:43 pm »
Two boys were sharing a bedroll
The night was cold and the whiskey taking its toll.
They got warm pretty quick
Then Jack put Ennis' hand on his d!ck
And they were one heart and one soul...

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S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1171 on: July 06, 2006, 06:14:22 pm »
More romance ...  :)


Jack's body glowed as lay by the fire,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1172 on: July 06, 2006, 06:15:46 pm »
Jack's body glowed as lay by the fire,
It filled Ennis with sweet desire,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1173 on: July 06, 2006, 06:29:47 pm »
Jack's body glowed as lay by the fire,
It filled Ennis with sweet desire.
Their hearts beating hard and fast,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1174 on: July 06, 2006, 06:34:03 pm »
Jack's body glowed as lay by the fire,
It filled Ennis with sweet desire.
Their hearts beating hard and fast,
they wished that this sweet night would last

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1175 on: July 06, 2006, 06:43:21 pm »
Jack's body glowed as lay by the fire,
It filled Ennis with sweet desire.
Their hearts beating hard and fast,
they wished that this sweet night would last
For only each other did they require.
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1176 on: July 06, 2006, 06:48:48 pm »
Jack's body glowed as lay by the fire,
It filled Ennis with sweet desire.
Their hearts beating hard and fast,
they wished that this sweet night would last
For only each other did they require.

*Sniff*... so sweet.

"Tent don't look right" said Ennis with a frown,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1177 on: July 06, 2006, 07:00:39 pm »
"Tent don't look right" said Ennis with a frown,
but I s'ppose it'll do when Jack needs to lie down

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1178 on: July 06, 2006, 07:06:42 pm »
"Tent don't look right" said Ennis with a frown,
but I s'ppose it'll do when Jack needs to lie down
Who cares about a tent?  Look at his eyes!  :o


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1179 on: July 06, 2006, 07:13:18 pm »
"Tent don't look right" said Ennis with a frown,
but I s'ppose it'll do when Jack needs to lie down
Who cares about a tent?  Look at his eyes!   :o
They're making my manhood rise
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.