Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1253784 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1220 on: July 09, 2006, 10:49:21 pm »
The night beside the fire got cold
And Jack in the tent was feeling bold.
He called out, 'Ennis git in the tent!'


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1221 on: July 10, 2006, 06:51:24 am »
The night beside the fire got cold
And Jack in the tent was feeling bold
He called out, "Ennis get in the tent"
So hat in hand, to Jack he went
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1222 on: July 10, 2006, 08:14:46 am »
The night beside the fire got cold
And Jack in the tent was feeling bold
He called out, "Ennis get in the tent"
So hat in hand, to Jack he went
and soon made TS1 unfold

Offline ThePirateBride

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1223 on: July 10, 2006, 11:05:58 am »
Perfect!   :D

As they ride by, the lake is so still
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

Offline Jackie Sparrow

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1224 on: July 10, 2006, 12:19:21 pm »
As they ride by, the lake is so still
And Jack, Ennis wants to drill
Captain Jack is back!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1225 on: July 10, 2006, 01:34:29 pm »
As they ride by, the lake is so still
And Jack, Ennis wants to drill
From their horses they dismount
I just want to celebrate another day of living.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1226 on: July 10, 2006, 02:01:14 pm »
As they ride by, the lake is so still
And Jack, Ennis wants to drill
From their horses they dismount
They had to make every second count.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1227 on: July 10, 2006, 02:10:16 pm »
As they ride by, the lake is so still
And Jack, Ennis wants to drill
From their horses they dismount
They had to make every second count; -
and this was before there were blue little pills.



 ::) I think this limericking stuff has corrupted my Brokeback sensibilities for good!  :o

Keep it up!  ;)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1228 on: July 10, 2006, 02:21:07 pm »
We like being naughty, so onward!   ;)

The tent and Jack were hot inside
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1229 on: July 10, 2006, 02:30:49 pm »
The tent and Jack were hot inside
Eniss knew he had nothing to hide
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection