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Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1340 on: July 17, 2006, 08:21:39 am »
They claimed to be saving up for a small spread,
Two separate lives,who knew what lie ahead?,
Ennis had wedding plans with Alma,
Jack was goin to help his old pa.
How I wish they'd just eloped together instead!

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Brought up to hard work and privation,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1341 on: July 17, 2006, 09:54:07 am »
Brought up to hard work and privation,
Our boys had a low expectation
Too much to do. . .I don't have time to get old!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1342 on: July 17, 2006, 11:43:20 am »
Brought up to hard work and privation,
Our boys had a low expectation.
They were used to the tough life,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1343 on: July 17, 2006, 12:02:02 pm »

Brought up to hard work and privation,
Our boys had a low expectation.
They were used to the tough life,
Where disappointment ran rife

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1344 on: July 17, 2006, 12:09:23 pm »
Brought up to hard work and privation,
Our boys had a low expectation.
They were used to the tough life,
Where disappointment ran rife,
still more sweet was each "fishin'-vacation"!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1345 on: July 17, 2006, 12:22:35 pm »
Another:


Every night together was heavenly bliss,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1346 on: July 17, 2006, 12:34:07 pm »
Every night together was heavenly bliss,
When two cowboys would join for a kiss,
Too much to do. . .I don't have time to get old!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1347 on: July 17, 2006, 01:11:22 pm »
Every night together was heavenly bliss,
When two cowboys would join for a kiss,
Hearts pounding, bodies tingling, sweat dripping


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1348 on: July 17, 2006, 01:19:05 pm »

Every night together was heavenly bliss,
When two cowboys would join for a kiss,
Hearts pounding, bodies tingling, sweat dripping
Would lead to some unzipping and stripping

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1349 on: July 17, 2006, 01:26:15 pm »
Every night together was heavenly bliss,
When two cowboys would join for a kiss,
Hearts pounding, bodies tingling, sweat dripping
Would lead to some unzipping and stripping
The passion so strong and way too hot to miss!