Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3232501 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2000 on: October 23, 2006, 08:38:22 pm »
He watched his reflection, as he walked away,
With all his might he kept his emotions at bay
"How can this be, how can it end?"
"Mebe I should turn around at the next bend."
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2001 on: October 23, 2006, 09:12:36 pm »
He watched his reflection, as he walked away,
With all his might he kept his emotions at bay
"How can this be, how can it end?"
"Mebe I should turn around at the next bend."
Or maybe I should just wait for another day.


It took four years, to send the card,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2002 on: October 23, 2006, 09:21:57 pm »
It took four years, to send the card,
What if Ennis doesn't answer, be so hard.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2003 on: October 23, 2006, 10:07:26 pm »
It took four years, to send the card,
What if Ennis doesn't answer, be so hard.
But the reply came back, "You bet", it said,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2004 on: October 23, 2006, 10:12:32 pm »
It took four years, to send the card,
What if Ennis doesn't answer, be so hard.
But the reply came back, "You bet", it said,
Jack grinned from ear to ear when he read.


For the one after this

As he passed thru Denver his red Ford pickup, Jack thought.
« Last Edit: October 23, 2006, 10:29:12 pm by jpwagoneer1964 »
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2005 on: October 23, 2006, 11:25:22 pm »
It took four years, to send the card,
What if Ennis doesn't answer, be so hard.
But the reply came back, "You bet", it said,
Jack grinned from ear to ear when he read.
So on to Riverton, he sped.


For the one after this

As he passed thru Denver his red Ford pickup, Jack thought.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2006 on: October 23, 2006, 11:26:23 pm »
As he passed thru Denver his red Ford pickup, Jack thought.
About the time that him and Ennis had fought,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2007 on: October 23, 2006, 11:57:02 pm »
As he passed thru Denver his red Ford pickup, Jack thought.
About the time that him and Ennis had fought,
In just as few more hours he and Ennis would meet.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2008 on: October 24, 2006, 07:08:52 am »
As he passed thru Denver his red Ford pickup, Jack thought.
About the time that him and Ennis had fought,
In just as few more hours he and Ennis would meet,
What will it be like?....Will he still be discreet?
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2009 on: October 24, 2006, 07:42:24 am »
As he passed thru Denver his red Ford pickup, Jack thought.
About the time that him and Ennis had fought,
In just as few more hours he and Ennis would meet,
What will it be like?....Will he still be discreet?
or with alma watching would they be caught?