Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3708913 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2010 on: October 24, 2006, 08:05:55 am »
He watched and he waited, the day seemed so long,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2011 on: October 24, 2006, 08:17:49 am »
He watched and he waited, the day seemed so long,
Would Jack ever get there, de he get the date wrong?
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2012 on: October 24, 2006, 08:21:19 am »
He watched and he waited, the day seemed so long,
Would Jack ever get there, de he get the date wrong?
Then all of a sudden, he heard him arrive,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2013 on: October 24, 2006, 08:31:20 am »
He watched and he waited, the day seemed so long,
Would Jack ever get there, de he get the date wrong?
Then all of a sudden, he heard him arrive,
Time seemed to stop he felt so alive
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2014 on: October 24, 2006, 08:35:40 am »
He watched and he waited, the day seemed so long,
Would Jack ever get there, de he get the date wrong?
Then all of a sudden, he heard him arrive,
Time seemed to stop he felt so alive
He knew when he saw him, thats where he belonged.


He stood on the steps and called out his name,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2015 on: October 24, 2006, 09:50:55 am »
He stood on the steps and called out his name,
JackTwist he said, one and the same
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Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2016 on: October 24, 2006, 10:25:48 am »
He stood on the steps and called out his name,
JackTwist he said, one and the same!
Then flew down the stairs,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2017 on: October 24, 2006, 10:29:20 am »
He stood on the steps and called out his name,
JackTwist he said, one and the same!
Then flew down the stairs,
Locking in an embrace of steel, abandoning all cares
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2018 on: October 24, 2006, 10:43:37 am »
He stood on the steps and called out his name,
JackTwist he said, one and the same!
Then flew down the stairs,
Locking in an embrace of steel, abandoning all cares
Their desire they could not tame.  :P



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Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2019 on: October 24, 2006, 11:59:16 am »
He felt he could paw the white outa the moon,
As he rode back to the sheep, he began to croon