Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Lumière]

He saw the bed, he saw the toy,
He knew the man, now sees the boy.
A lone tear escaped his eye,

[Katie77]

He saw the bed, he saw the toy,
He knew the man, now sees the boy.
A lone tear escaped his eye,
He thinks of Jack, it makes him cry,

[moremojo]

He saw the bed, he saw the toy,
He knew the man, now sees the boy.
A lone tear escaped his eye,
He thinks of Jack, it makes him cry,
To remember and mourn their lost joy.

[Lumière]

  Another sad one:


The postcard read: " .. I can meet you at Pine Creek."

[jpwagoneer1964]

The postcard read: " .. I can meet you at Pine Creek."
It came back to Ennis the very next week

[Lumière]

The postcard read: " .. I can meet you at Pine Creek."
It came back to Ennis the very next week
His world stopped when he read the words: "Deceased"

[jpwagoneer1964]

The postcard read: " .. I can meet you at Pine Creek."
It came back to Ennis the very next week
His world stopped when he read the words: "Deceased"
  Jack can't be gone, has to be a mistake, Ennis;'s breath ceased

[Lumière]

The postcard read: " .. I can meet you at Pine Creek."
It came back to Ennis the very next week
His world stopped when he read the words: "Deceased"
Jack can't be gone, has to be a mistake, Ennis's breath ceased.
He whispered Jack's name, desperate for a little solace to seek.

[Katie77]

His words were trembling as he talked in the phone,

[jpwagoneer1964]

His words were trembling as he talked in the phone,
He felt his world collapse, down to the bone