Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3236279 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2330 on: December 03, 2006, 05:22:05 pm »
She looks at her Dad, and sees his sad face,
She wonders when he'll leave this depressing place


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2331 on: December 03, 2006, 09:30:47 pm »
She looks at her Dad, and sees his sad face,
She wonders when he'll leave this depressing place.
"You'll be at the wedding, right dad?"


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2332 on: December 03, 2006, 09:36:55 pm »
She looks at her Dad, and sees his sad face,
She wonders when he'll leave this depressing place.
"You'll be at the wedding, right dad?"
When he said the roundup, she looked so sad.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2333 on: December 03, 2006, 11:04:41 pm »
She looks at her Dad, and sees his sad face,
She wonders when he'll leave this depressing place.
"You'll be at the wedding, right dad?"
When he said the roundup, she looked so sad.
For her daddy no one could replace!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2334 on: December 04, 2006, 07:34:48 am »
He looked at the shirts, that hung on the door,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

Offline saucycobblers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2335 on: December 04, 2006, 09:08:29 am »
He looked at the shirts, that hung on the door,
From that blissful time when they were both dirt poor,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2336 on: December 04, 2006, 10:48:03 am »
He looked at the shirts, that hung on the door,
From that blissful time when they were both dirt poor,
So happy he couyld paw the white out of the moon.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2337 on: December 04, 2006, 04:49:43 pm »
He looked at the shirts, that hung on the door,
From that blissful time when they were both dirt poor,
So happy he couyld paw the white out of the moon.
And hear that harmonica, play a tune,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2338 on: December 04, 2006, 05:01:20 pm »
He looked at the shirts, that hung on the door,
From that blissful time when they were both dirt poor,
So happy he could paw white from the moon.
And hear that harmonica, play a tune,
Once happy — now sad  — to his core.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2339 on: December 04, 2006, 05:02:14 pm »
There once was a right clever Basque