Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235473 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2360 on: December 06, 2006, 01:08:41 pm »
They'd walk together hand in hand
(in Jack's dreams) over sweet, green land,
Lay together, side by side,
touching mouths their lips would glide,
In ecstacy, struck by love's magic wand.



 :)  Another:


It's been a while, let me watch you sleep


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2361 on: December 06, 2006, 01:13:02 pm »
It's been a while, let me watch you sleep
So peaceful, beautiful, makes me weep.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2362 on: December 06, 2006, 06:31:39 pm »
It's been a while, let me watch you sleep
So peaceful, beautiful, makes me weep.
Just like them Brokeback days, safe by your side,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2363 on: December 06, 2006, 06:50:35 pm »
It's been a while, let me watch you sleep
So peaceful, beautiful, makes me weep.
Just like them Brokeback days, safe by your side,
Those were the days, what an unbelievable ride!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2364 on: December 06, 2006, 06:53:49 pm »
It's been a while, let me watch you sleep
So peaceful, beautiful, makes me weep.
Just like them Brokeback days, safe by your side,
Those were the days, what an unbelievable ride!
And providing me with memories to keep.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2365 on: December 06, 2006, 07:08:44 pm »
Aside: I really like this last one, guys! :)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2366 on: December 06, 2006, 09:28:49 pm »
Me too.  Perhaps the best one yet...good work people...Doug

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2367 on: December 08, 2006, 06:55:15 pm »
Another:
(I wrote a lil poem recently that starts with this ..)


Love me like there is no tomorrow,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2368 on: December 08, 2006, 07:02:58 pm »
Love me like there is no tomorrow,
Love me true, and feel no sorrow,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2369 on: December 08, 2006, 07:22:36 pm »
Love me like there is no tomorrow
Love me true, and feel no sorrow
Too much time that has been wasted