Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Lumière]

Jack slammed Ennis against the motel door
Four long years he had waited for more,
His heart hammered hard in his chest
His thoughts were on lovin', no time for rest,
And before long, he was on his back on the floor.


 

[Katie77]

Lips pressing, bodies grinding, the two were one,

[moremojo]

Lips pressing, bodies grinding, the two were one,
The room's fly-spattered lightbulb was the moon to their Sun,

[Katie77]

Lips pressing, bodies grinding, the two were one,
The room's fly-spattered lightbulb was the moon to their Sun,
Their groans of passion, their words of love,

[Lumière]

Lips pressing, bodies grinding, the two were one,
The room's fly-spattered lightbulb was the moon to their Sun,
Their groans of passion, their words of love,
Pierced the air, floating to the heavens above.

[moremojo]

Lips pressing, bodies grinding, the two were one,
The room's fly-spattered lightbulb was the moon to their Sun,
Their groans of passion, their words of love,
Pierced the air, floating to the heavens above.
And lingered till their tryst was done.

How about...

It was a cold dawn when he learned Jack was gone

[Lumière]

It was a cold dawn when he learned Jack was gone
A lifetime, a passion, a love .. over and done

[Katie77]

It was a cold dawn when he learned Jack was gone
A lifetime, a passion, a love .. over and done
There was never enough time,now too late

[LauraGigs]

It was a cold dawn when he learned Jack was gone
A lifetime, a passion, a love .. over and done
There was never enough time, now too late
A sudden and cruel turn of fate

[Pipedream]

It was a cold dawn when he learned Jack was gone
A lifetime, a passion, a love .. over and done
There was never enough time, now too late
A sudden and cruel turn of fate
Ennis yearned for some comfort, but there was none