Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3236017 times)

Offline LauraGigs

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2640 on: February 28, 2007, 02:51:16 pm »
Their kiss, it seemed to last forever
A kiss they thought, would happen never,
The world seemed to pass them by
As they pressed – face, chest, groin and thigh

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2641 on: March 01, 2007, 02:25:12 pm »
Their kiss, it seemed to last forever
A kiss they thought, would happen never,
The world seemed to pass them by
As they pressed – face, chest, groin and thigh
To think themselves unseen wasn't so clever.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2642 on: March 01, 2007, 04:42:55 pm »
They knew they needed their time alone,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2643 on: March 01, 2007, 06:45:13 pm »
They knew they needed their time alone.
So much built-up testosterone!
« Last Edit: March 01, 2007, 06:48:19 pm by LauraGigs »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2644 on: March 01, 2007, 11:45:58 pm »
The once was a cowpoke named Jack
With sexual needs…alas and alack
But with a hand on his prick
And a little clear slick
Ennis was all over his back

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2645 on: March 02, 2007, 04:21:06 pm »
They knew they needed their time alone.
So much built-up testosterone!
Jack was shaking from his head to his feet




p/s:  Hello goaboydc!  :)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2646 on: March 02, 2007, 05:43:08 pm »
They knew they needed their time alone.
So much built-up testosterone!
Jack was shaking from his head to his feet
And yet, there was still Alma to greet

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2647 on: March 02, 2007, 07:49:43 pm »
They knew they needed their time alone.
So much built-up testosterone!
Jack was shaking from his head to his feet
And yet, there was still Alma to greet.
They craved the time when they'd be on their own!


ANother:  :)

They made love three times that night


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2648 on: March 03, 2007, 08:38:48 am »
They made love three times that night
Being together felt sooooo right
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2649 on: March 03, 2007, 06:35:41 pm »
They made love three times that night
Being together felt sooooo right
Four f*ckin years had just been wasted