Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1050646 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #310 on: June 02, 2006, 12:45:40 pm »
Before Jack met Ennis summer of sixty-three,
he dreamed of every Cowboy that he would see.
He loved their walk, their talk, their look,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #311 on: June 02, 2006, 12:54:47 pm »
Before Jack met Ennis summer of sixty-three,
he dreamed of every Cowboy that he would see.
He loved their walk, their talk, their look,
He'd do anything they wanted, even offer to cook!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #312 on: June 02, 2006, 01:00:08 pm »
Before Jack met Ennis summer of sixty-three,
he dreamed of every Cowboy that he would see.
He loved their walk, their talk, their look,
He'd do anything they wanted, even offer to cook!
But del Mar was the fairest of them all, woo-wee!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #313 on: June 02, 2006, 03:27:11 pm »
New round:

The fire died down on the camp site


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #314 on: June 02, 2006, 03:30:52 pm »
The fire died down on the camp site,
And Ennis shivered all through the night.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #315 on: June 02, 2006, 03:39:26 pm »
The fire died down on the camp site,
And Ennis shivered all through the night,
while Jack slept warmly inside the tent,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #316 on: June 02, 2006, 03:41:54 pm »
The fire died down on the camp site,
And Ennis shivered all through the night,
while Jack slept warmly inside the tent,
Ennis Hammered loudly with no relent,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #317 on: June 02, 2006, 03:44:30 pm »
The fire died down on the camp site,
And Ennis shivered all through the night,
while Jack slept warmly inside the tent,
Ennis Hammered loudly with no relent,
and was frozen to death by the first light....

Jeez people. It takes you ages to get to the point, doesn't it??  ;D


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #318 on: June 02, 2006, 03:46:29 pm »
The fire died down on the camp site,
And Ennis shivered all through the night,
while Jack slept warmly inside the tent,
Ennis Hammered loudly with no relent,
and was frozen to death by the first light....


Anke - I cant believe you froze Ennis to death...Jeez lady!  ;D


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Let's continue it...


Jack called out and into the tent Ennis staggered,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #319 on: June 02, 2006, 03:46:53 pm »
and was frozen to death by the first light....


OMG!    (faints!)     :P