Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1093787 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #360 on: June 04, 2006, 10:55:46 am »
Ennis married, getting a wife
It ended in trouble and strife....
He didn't understand
Why he couldn't land


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #361 on: June 04, 2006, 11:31:44 am »
Ennis married, getting a wife
It ended in trouble and strife....
He didn't understand
Why he couldn't land
In a happier place in his life!


While the dogs baby-sat all the sheep
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #362 on: June 04, 2006, 11:40:39 am »
While the dogs baby-sat all the sheep
The love of our boys, it grew deep


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #363 on: June 04, 2006, 12:26:34 pm »
While the dogs baby-sat all the sheep
The love of our boys, it grew deep,
So they didn't notice when they were spied upon by Aguirre,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #364 on: June 04, 2006, 02:48:35 pm »
While the dogs baby-sat all the sheep
The love of our boys, it grew deep,
So they didn't notice when they were spied upon by Aguirre,
the boys frolicked openly their passions a-fire!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #365 on: June 04, 2006, 02:53:54 pm »
While the dogs baby-sat all the sheep
The love of our boys, it grew deep,
So they didn't notice when they were spied upon by Aguirre,
the boys frolicked openly their passions a-fire!
And their love made hearts a-leap.

Ah that was crap, feel free to change mine if you come up with a better one cause mine is crap.

I did kinda come up with one myself, it's not very good, but good for a minutes work:

Once two cowboys got pissed
And really enjoyed their trysts
They tried to stay together
And weather all weathers
But Jack disappeared to the mist

As I said kinda crappy and you will have to allow me some poetic lisence, but good enough. :)
"Look too often at those hills, lie too long beside those rippling rivers, and you may think you are hearing a love song, when actually it is a death song." Larry McMurtry, Brokeback Mountain: Story to Screenplay.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #366 on: June 04, 2006, 05:02:29 pm »
Haha! Hi Becky! Welcome back!  :D

New round:

The tent on the mountain don't look right.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #367 on: June 04, 2006, 05:10:39 pm »
Glad to be back Anke! ;D

The tent on the mountain don't look right
Then came one hot and steamy night  ;D
"Look too often at those hills, lie too long beside those rippling rivers, and you may think you are hearing a love song, when actually it is a death song." Larry McMurtry, Brokeback Mountain: Story to Screenplay.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #368 on: June 04, 2006, 07:17:22 pm »
By God Milli you so need some dance lessons!

haha Ray, I am a good dancer!  Its not my fault you can't keep up with me.. :P ;D

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The tent on the mountain don't look right
Then came one hot and steamy night ;
Jack and Ennis were mighty horny,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #369 on: June 04, 2006, 07:27:45 pm »
The tent on the mountain don't look right
Then came one hot and steamy night ;
Jack and Ennis were mighty horny,
they stemmed the rose that wasn't thorny,