Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1138165 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #390 on: June 05, 2006, 11:30:51 am »
Ain't no little thing happenin' here
Even though I say "I ain't queer",
he lamented letting Jack out of his sights,
He was so damn mad, he got into fights,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #391 on: June 05, 2006, 11:41:50 am »
Ain't no little thing happenin' here
Even though I say "I ain't queer",
he lamented letting Jack out of his sights,
He was so damn mad, he got into fights,
He just could let go of his irrational fear!
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #392 on: June 05, 2006, 11:43:14 am »
Two scared girls waved from the porch,
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #393 on: June 05, 2006, 11:56:55 am »
Two scared girls waved from the porch,
He was hot with anger, burning like a torch,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #394 on: June 05, 2006, 12:51:44 pm »

Two scared girls waved from the porch,
He was hot with anger, burning like a torch,
Then a pickup blocked his path,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #395 on: June 05, 2006, 12:58:02 pm »
Two scared girls waved from the porch,
He was hot with anger, burning like a torch,
Then a pickup blocked his path,
He lost it and unleashed his wrath


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #396 on: June 05, 2006, 02:14:03 pm »
Two scared girls waved from the porch,
He was hot with anger, burning like a torch,
Then a pickup blocked his path,
He lost it and unleashed his wrath
Yeah, Alma's "Jack Twist? Jack Nasty!" words did scorch!


Jack offered a drink to a clown,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #397 on: June 05, 2006, 02:30:14 pm »
Jack offered a drink to a clown,
but the silly oaf turned him down.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #398 on: June 05, 2006, 02:33:56 pm »
Jack offered a drink to a clown,
but the silly oaf turned him down,
Jack gave him the look,
And played by the book,

Sorry, kinda did two there, it is just that I haven't been on here in a while so I thought I would make up for it.
"Look too often at those hills, lie too long beside those rippling rivers, and you may think you are hearing a love song, when actually it is a death song." Larry McMurtry, Brokeback Mountain: Story to Screenplay.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #399 on: June 05, 2006, 02:36:51 pm »
Jack offered a drink to a clown,
but the silly oaf turned him down,
Jack gave him the look,
And played by the book,
"F--k him", said Jack with a frown.

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