Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3396337 times)

Offline mariez

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3910 on: October 30, 2008, 08:49:56 pm »
How about...

After the divorce, he was all alone
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3911 on: October 30, 2008, 09:13:26 pm »
After the divorce, he was all alone
And not have to listen to Alma groan
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3912 on: October 30, 2008, 09:31:12 pm »

After the divorce, he was all alone
And not have to listen to Alma groan
Jack showed up, a surprise!


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3913 on: October 30, 2008, 09:40:13 pm »
After the divorce, he was all alone
And not have to listen to Alma groan
Jack showed up, a surprise!
Then left with tears pouring out of his eyes
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3914 on: October 30, 2008, 10:01:28 pm »

After the divorce, he was all alone
And not have to listen to Alma groan
Jack showed up, a surprise!
Then left with tears pouring out of his eyes
because a lack of commitment Ennis had shown.


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3915 on: October 30, 2008, 11:05:14 pm »



  Jack used to like to watch Ennis ride.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3916 on: October 30, 2008, 11:15:24 pm »
Jack used to like to watch Ennis ride.
His bum in the saddle, going side to side
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3917 on: October 30, 2008, 11:24:26 pm »


Jack used to like to watch Ennis ride.
His bum in the saddle, going side to side
Cigar Butt was his favorite horse.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3918 on: October 31, 2008, 12:06:12 am »
Jack used to like to watch Ennis ride.
His bum in the saddle, going side to side
Cigar Butt was his favorite horse.
He could ride him calm without any force
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3919 on: October 31, 2008, 11:49:26 am »




Jack used to like to watch Ennis ride.
His bum in the saddle, going side to side
Cigar Butt was his favorite horse.
He could ride him calm without any force
For twenty years their love would abide.



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