Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1073084 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #460 on: June 06, 2006, 09:02:09 pm »
The snow barely lasted an hour,
Yet Joe issued an order so dour,
Jack began to take down the tent,
Ennis started to vent,
He felt angry, sick; life could be so sour.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #461 on: June 06, 2006, 09:03:29 pm »
Ennis showered and wore his sunday best,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #462 on: June 06, 2006, 09:10:57 pm »
His shirt was clean and his hair was pressed
What is essential, is invisible to the eye....

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #463 on: June 06, 2006, 09:21:25 pm »
Ennis showered and wore his sunday best,
His shirt was clean and his hair was pressed,
After four long years he'd see

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #464 on: June 06, 2006, 09:50:27 pm »
Ennis showered and wore his sunday best,
His shirt was clean and his hair was pressed,
After four long years he'd see
That true to Jack his heart'll always be,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #465 on: June 07, 2006, 12:12:43 am »
Ennis showered and wore his Sunday best,
His shirt was clean and his hair was pressed,
After four long years he'd see
That true to Jack his heart'll always be,
T'was real love, so diff'rent from the rest.



Jack's mother baked a cherry cake that morn'
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #466 on: June 07, 2006, 12:24:13 am »

Jack's mother baked a cherry cake that morn',
She hummed, thinking of the day her son was born.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #467 on: June 07, 2006, 12:36:30 am »
Jack's mother baked a cherry cake that morn',
She hummed, thinking of the day her son was born.
She knew that Ennis would soon be there

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #468 on: June 07, 2006, 01:25:14 am »
Jack's mother baked a cherry cake that morn',
She hummed, thinking of the day her son was born.
She knew that Ennis would soon be there
He came and she offered him a chair


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #469 on: June 07, 2006, 03:06:39 am »
Jack's mother baked a cherry cake that morn',
She hummed, thinking of the day her son was born.
She knew that Ennis would soon be there
He came and she offered him a chair
And Pappa Twist carried on like a raw prawn!
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