Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Lumière]

Your quiet manner is sweet, your smile is heaven
Your face is smooth, especially when shaven,
I want you like I have wanted no other
Make love to me! I need it, brother!
For in you I've found my haven.

How sweet!   

[Lumière]

Ennis' reply to Jack's letter... 


I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,

[Mikaela]

I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me this is a big deal,

[Lumière]

I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me it's such a big deal,
Makin' love to you leaves me breathless,

[memento]

I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me it's such a big deal,
Makin' love to you leaves me breathless,
If we were together, our love would be deathless,

[ThePirateBride]

I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me it's such a big deal,
Makin' love to you leaves me breathless,
If we were together, our love would be deathless,
And life would always be on an even keel.

[Lumière]

I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me it's such a big deal,
Makin' love to you leaves me breathless,
If we were together, our love would be deathless,
Jack f-ckin' Twist, my heart your love did steal.

[Snowflakes]

We doubled up here!  Let's play again:

Jack red-lined it to his true love's side

[Pipedream]

Jack red-lined it to his true love's side
He gave a damn about Ennis' bride

[Lumière]

Jack red-lined it to his true love's side
He gave a damn about Ennis' bride.
He couldn't picture Ennis with her,