Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1050988 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #490 on: June 07, 2006, 01:00:33 pm »
Your quiet manner is sweet, your smile is heaven
Your face is smooth, especially when shaven,
I want you like I have wanted no other
Make love to me! I need it, brother!
For in you I've found my haven.

How sweet!   :-*


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #491 on: June 07, 2006, 01:01:49 pm »
Ennis' reply to Jack's letter...  ;D


I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #492 on: June 07, 2006, 01:04:24 pm »
I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me this is a big deal,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #493 on: June 07, 2006, 01:06:31 pm »
I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me it's such a big deal,
Makin' love to you leaves me breathless,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #494 on: June 07, 2006, 01:31:18 pm »
I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me it's such a big deal,
Makin' love to you leaves me breathless,
If we were together, our love would be deathless,

Offline ThePirateBride

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #495 on: June 07, 2006, 01:34:54 pm »
I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me it's such a big deal,
Makin' love to you leaves me breathless,
If we were together, our love would be deathless,
And life would always be on an even keel.
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #496 on: June 07, 2006, 01:39:38 pm »
I can't begin to tell you how confused I feel,
I know when you're with me it's such a big deal,
Makin' love to you leaves me breathless,
If we were together, our love would be deathless,
Jack f-ckin' Twist, my heart your love did steal.


Offline Snowflakes

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #497 on: June 07, 2006, 02:18:56 pm »
We doubled up here!  Let's play again:

Jack red-lined it to his true love's side
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #498 on: June 07, 2006, 02:23:50 pm »
Jack red-lined it to his true love's side
He gave a damn about Ennis' bride


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #499 on: June 07, 2006, 02:30:19 pm »
Jack red-lined it to his true love's side
He gave a damn about Ennis' bride.
He couldn't picture Ennis with her,