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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #680 on: June 15, 2006, 11:55:02 am »
Two shirts are together forever.
A greater love there was never
One check and one blue
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #681 on: June 15, 2006, 11:57:07 am »
Two shirts are together forever,
A greater love there was never.
One check and one blue,
One of me, one of you


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #682 on: June 15, 2006, 12:03:04 pm »
Two shirts are together forever,
A greater love there was never.
One check and one blue,
One of me, one of you
A union that no-one could sever.  :'(

Oooh, let's lighten things up again... *sniff*

Jack saddled his horse for the ride,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #683 on: June 15, 2006, 12:05:12 pm »
Jack saddled his horse for the ride,
His excitement he hardly could hide


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #684 on: June 15, 2006, 12:10:23 pm »
Jack saddled his horse for the ride,
His excitement he hardly could hide.
Tonight could be the night,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #685 on: June 15, 2006, 12:16:01 pm »
Jack saddled his horse for the ride,
His excitement he hardly could hide.
Tonight could be the night,
Everything felt just right,
"Look too often at those hills, lie too long beside those rippling rivers, and you may think you are hearing a love song, when actually it is a death song." Larry McMurtry, Brokeback Mountain: Story to Screenplay.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #686 on: June 15, 2006, 12:20:07 pm »
Jack saddled his horse for the ride,
His excitement he hardly could hide.
Tonight could be the night,
Everything felt just right,
How he'd lay him, he'd yet to decide...

 ;D


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #687 on: June 15, 2006, 01:11:35 pm »
Excellent, onward with happy thoughts!

The Motel Siesta had a vacancy
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #688 on: June 15, 2006, 01:16:22 pm »
The Motel Siesta had a vacancy
'Motel toilet cleaner' hadn't been taken, see?
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #689 on: June 15, 2006, 03:06:41 pm »
The Motel Siesta had a vacancy
'Motel toilet cleaner' hadn't been taken, see?
They jumped onto the creaking bed,