Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1144007 times)

Offline Snowflakes

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #710 on: June 16, 2006, 01:09:05 pm »
Jack stood naked by the river,
The friggin cold made him shiver.
"He'll never talk to me again!", he sighed.
But to himself he belied
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #711 on: June 16, 2006, 01:20:00 pm »
Jack stood naked by the river,
The friggin cold made him shiver.
"He'll never talk to me again!", he sighed.
But to himself he belied,
there is hope yet, and more than a sliver!

Offline ThePirateBride

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #712 on: June 16, 2006, 01:22:36 pm »
Lovely!   :)

Lureen had talent as a barrel racer
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #713 on: June 16, 2006, 01:31:37 pm »
Lureen had talent as a barrel racer,
and when she saw Jack Twist, she became a chaser,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #714 on: June 16, 2006, 01:37:27 pm »
Lureen had talent as a barrel racer,
and when she saw Jack Twist, she became a chaser,
she even uttered the matin' call

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #715 on: June 16, 2006, 01:43:44 pm »
Lureen had talent as a barrel racer,
and when she saw Jack Twist, she became a chaser,
she even uttered the matin' call,
and didn't know how hard she'd fall,

Offline Becky

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #716 on: June 16, 2006, 01:58:01 pm »
Lureen had talent as a barrel racer,
and when she saw Jack Twist, she became a chaser,
she even uttered the matin' call,
and didn't know how hard she'd fall,
She thought if she came to close Jack would mace her!

Hahahahaha so random, sorry I have just runined that limerick, please feel free to take it out and put your own, and better versions in. ;D
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #717 on: June 16, 2006, 02:02:37 pm »
That's the fun of it though!

Jack and Ennis shared an embrace
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #718 on: June 16, 2006, 02:06:09 pm »
Jack and Ennis shared an embrace
that had them both in a complete daze

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #719 on: June 16, 2006, 02:12:53 pm »
Jack and Ennis shared an embrace
that had them both in a complete daze
Ennis savored Jack's musky smell,