Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1215483 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #760 on: June 17, 2006, 05:28:53 pm »
Ennis was muscular, lean as a clothes-pole,
He couldn't rock, but he sure could roll,
Jack was thin and could buck and twist,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #761 on: June 17, 2006, 08:41:37 pm »
Ennis was muscular, lean as a clothes-pole,
He couldn't rock, but he sure could roll,
Jack was thin and could buck and twist,
and when he first saw Ennis, he couldn't resist

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #762 on: June 17, 2006, 08:47:11 pm »
Ennis was muscular, lean as a clothes-pole,
He couldn't rock, but he sure could roll,
Jack was thin and could buck and twist,
and when he first saw Ennis, he couldn't resist
He was blown away, mind, body and soul!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #763 on: June 18, 2006, 01:53:51 pm »
Time to star another -  :)


Ennis was dizzy, drunk and on all fours,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #764 on: June 18, 2006, 02:51:43 pm »
Ennis was dizzy, drunk and on all fours,
when he let his love for Jack run its course

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #765 on: June 19, 2006, 12:32:59 am »
Ennis was dizzy, drunk and on all fours,
when he let his love for Jack run its course.
He was tired, sleepy, horny and drunk,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #766 on: June 19, 2006, 10:28:37 am »
Ennis was dizzy, drunk and on all fours,
when he let his love for Jack run its course.
He was tired, sleepy, horny and drunk,
and into the cozy tent he would plunk,
« Last Edit: June 19, 2006, 10:39:31 am by Memento »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #767 on: June 19, 2006, 10:55:24 am »
Ennis was dizzy, drunk and on all fours,
when he let his love for Jack run its course.
He was tired, sleepy, horny and drunk,
and into the cozy tent he would plunk,
Knowing Jack would always be his horse.
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #768 on: June 19, 2006, 11:12:59 am »
Starting another very poetic one here:  ;)



The distant mountains beckoned them

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #769 on: June 19, 2006, 11:28:32 am »
The distant mountains beckoned them,
To their powerful greatness, they would succumb
« Last Edit: June 19, 2006, 11:40:40 am by Memento »