Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1274422 times)

Offline Snowflakes

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #810 on: June 22, 2006, 11:48:33 am »
A lone cowboy arrives in Signal Wyoming,
All his life he's been roaming
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #811 on: June 22, 2006, 11:50:50 am »
A lone cowboy arrives in Signal Wyoming,
All his life he's been roaming.
All his possessions in a brown paper bag,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #812 on: June 22, 2006, 12:08:48 pm »
A lone cowboy arrives in Signal Wyoming,
All his life he's been roaming.
All his possessions in a brown paper bag,
self-conscious, too serious, not planning to brag

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #813 on: June 22, 2006, 12:21:07 pm »
A lone cowboy arrives in Signal Wyoming,
All his life he's been roaming.
All his possessions in a brown paper bag,
self-conscious, too serious, not planning to brag
For love will follow the gloaming.
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

Offline ThePirateBride

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #814 on: June 22, 2006, 12:28:04 pm »
Splendid!   :D

Tenderly, they held each other in the dark
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #815 on: June 22, 2006, 12:29:40 pm »
Tenderly, they held each other in the dark
but heartache had already left its mark


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #816 on: June 22, 2006, 12:30:50 pm »
Tenderly, they held each other in the dark
but heartache had already left its mark.
So many hopes crushed, words unsaid


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #817 on: June 22, 2006, 12:44:16 pm »
Tenderly, they held each other in the dark
but heartache had already left its mark.
So many hopes crushed, words unsaid
dreams gone pale, plans left for dead



 :'(

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #818 on: June 22, 2006, 12:48:25 pm »
Tenderly, they held each other in the dark
but heartache had already left its mark.
So many hopes crushed, words unsaid
dreams gone pale, plans left for dead
As they listened to the sad tunes of a distant lark.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #819 on: June 22, 2006, 12:50:40 pm »
Something more upbeat!  :)


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