Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1274439 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #870 on: June 23, 2006, 01:02:07 pm »
Ennis learned the news via the US mail
He was crushed, his heart 'bout to fail   :(


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #871 on: June 23, 2006, 01:03:28 pm »
Ennis learned the news via the US mail
He was crushed, his heart 'bout to fail.   
That one word "Deceased"

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #872 on: June 23, 2006, 01:15:22 pm »
Ennis learned the news via the US mail
He was crushed, his heart 'bout to fail.   
That one word "Deceased"
Was crushing, he couldn't be appeased


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #873 on: June 23, 2006, 01:20:12 pm »
Ennis learned the news via the US mail
He was crushed, his heart 'bout to fail.   
That one word "Deceased"
Was crushing, he couldn't be appeased.
't was a sad, tragic end to their tale.

 :'( :'( :'(
« Last Edit: June 23, 2006, 01:50:22 pm by Mikaela »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #874 on: June 23, 2006, 01:47:50 pm »
Boo hoo hoo! :'(  Let's try a happy one!

Jack made Ennis smile so very wide
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #875 on: June 23, 2006, 02:19:21 pm »
Jack made Ennis smile so very wide,
They were at their best when they were side by side,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #876 on: June 23, 2006, 02:21:53 pm »
Jack made Ennis smile so very wide,
They were at their best when they were side by side.
In midday sun or late at night

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #877 on: June 23, 2006, 03:17:36 pm »
Jack made Ennis smile so very wide,
They were at their best when they were side by side.
In midday sun or late at night,
when Jack washed clothes it was quite a sight

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #878 on: June 23, 2006, 03:21:39 pm »

Jack made Ennis smile so very wide,
They were at their best when they were side by side.
In midday sun or late at night,
when Jack washed clothes it was quite a sight,
They were together as long as they could ride.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #879 on: June 23, 2006, 03:53:42 pm »
Good one!  Another:


He fumbled with his belt buckle, breathing hard    :o