Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3184627 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2070 on: November 03, 2006, 05:55:16 am »
"you gonna sit around tying knots all day"
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2071 on: November 03, 2006, 07:12:19 am »
I've not posted here before - may I join in?

One day out in Signal, Wyoming,
that last ling'ring kiss was still foaming,
Ennis noticed his lost shirt,
And with his heart in the dirt,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2072 on: November 03, 2006, 04:52:48 pm »
One day out in Signal, Wyoming,
that last ling'ring kiss was still foaming,
Ennis noticed his lost shirt,
And with his heart in the dirt,
He left to continue his roaming....


Wecome Kazza...please keep joining in)


Two shirts hung there in the closet
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2073 on: November 03, 2006, 04:54:44 pm »
Two shirts hung there in the closet
One over the other, a perfect fit
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2074 on: November 03, 2006, 05:03:45 pm »
Two shirts hung there in the closet
One over the other, a perfect fit   oh shit...couldnt you rhyme it with "closet"...now i dont know where this one is going

Ok....lets see......

Two shirts hung there in the closet,
Damn, he thought he had lost et,
One over the other, a perfect fit,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2075 on: November 03, 2006, 05:12:39 pm »
Two shirts hung there in the closet,
Damn, he thought he had lost et,
One over the other, a perfect fit.
So overcome Ennis had to sit,



Sorry Katie
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2076 on: November 03, 2006, 05:30:31 pm »
Two shirts hung there in the closet,
Damn, he thought he had lost et,
One over the other, a perfect fit.
So overcome Ennis had to sit,
on the toilet taking a shit
Sorry Katie
sorry in advance


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2077 on: November 03, 2006, 06:17:12 pm »

 :laugh: Not exactly a limerick, but very poetic!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2078 on: November 03, 2006, 06:21:32 pm »
Let's try this again

"You gonna sit around tying knots all day"
Keepin' your feelin's inside at bay
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2079 on: November 03, 2006, 06:21:45 pm »
:laugh: Not exactly a limerick, but very poetic!

Hehehehe Thank you kindly Ma'am