Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3185023 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1430 on: July 24, 2006, 06:26:57 pm »
Ennis awoke from his sleepy doze
to Jack's loving whispers 'bout stemming the rose
Ennis sighed, "Boy, your rose is all ever I want!



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1431 on: July 25, 2006, 12:47:15 am »
Ennis awoke from his sleepy doze
to Jack's loving whispers 'bout stemming the rose
Ennis sighed, "Boy, your rose is all ever I want!"
His feelings were real, though his love he dared not flaunt

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1432 on: July 25, 2006, 11:22:43 am »
Ennis awoke from his sleepy doze
to Jack's loving whispers 'bout stemming the rose
Ennis sighed, "Boy, your rose is all ever I want!"
His feelings were real, though his love he dared not flaunt
"C'mere",Jack whispered holding Ennis tight and close.

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Sometimes I miss ya so much, it pains me


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1433 on: July 25, 2006, 06:21:20 pm »
Sometimes I miss ya so much, it pains me
Why cant you stay, and let things just be
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1434 on: July 25, 2006, 06:44:26 pm »
Sometimes I miss ya so much, it pains me
Why cant you stay, and let things just be
Twice a year just ain't good enough!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1435 on: July 25, 2006, 08:09:17 pm »
Sometimes I miss ya so uch, it pains me,
Why cant you stay, and let yhings just be,
Twice a year just aint good enough,
The longing and yearning, gets a  bit tough,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1436 on: July 25, 2006, 08:55:59 pm »
Sometimes I miss ya so much, it pains me,
Why cant you stay, and let things just be,
Twice a year just aint good enough!
The longing and yearning, gets a  bit tough,
I want you now and always.  Can't you see?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1437 on: July 25, 2006, 11:23:19 pm »
"Well, I'm goin a warsh everything I can reach,
Then I'll look like a nice juicy peach!"

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1438 on: July 26, 2006, 12:42:49 am »
"Well, I'm goin a warsh everything I can reach,
Then I'll look like a nice juicy peach"
Freshen up, and feel like new
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1439 on: July 26, 2006, 01:36:53 am »
"Well, I'm goin a warsh everything I can reach,
Then I'll look like a nice juicy peach"
Freshen up, and feel like new
And then I can get my hands on you!