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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #110 on: November 30, 2008, 02:56:15 pm »
another chapter!  Jeremy has something on his mind.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/282795.html

Well, I'd like to give these to Paula. Are the Tourmaline residents listening?  :)



She really deserves them. I know she only doing her job, but the courteous and professional way she's doing it deserves very high praise. Go Paula!!

Thanks Louise. I'm glad Paula put Jeremy's mind to rest. Now maybe Jeremy can forget all about it and spend some quality time with Nicky?  ::)

(I'm not hinting of course, nah, I'm really not  ;))
'We're supposed to guard the sheep, not eat 'em'

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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #111 on: November 30, 2008, 03:49:30 pm »
well I think you have all talked me into it.  I think I may have a way of getting Paula a love interest!!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #112 on: November 30, 2008, 03:58:47 pm »
well I think you have all talked me into it.  I think I may have a way of getting Paula a love interest!!

I like the direction you're thinking!  :)
'We're supposed to guard the sheep, not eat 'em'

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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #113 on: November 30, 2008, 08:39:11 pm »
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She really deserves them. I know she only doing her job, but the courteous and professional way she's doing it deserves very high praise. Go Paula!!

Thanks Louise. I'm glad Paula put Jeremy's mind to rest. Now maybe Jeremy can forget all about it and spend some quality time with Nicky?  ::)

(I'm not hinting of course, nah, I'm really not  ;))

Yes, yes and me neither!  ;)


And I see Chapter 28 is up!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/283123.html?#cutid1


Yep, that was classic, Ellery, for sure! I hate to see Colson distressed, but I have to admit it was great to see the Chief Deputy in action!  It'll be interesting to see where this leads.... thanks, Louise!

Marie
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #114 on: November 30, 2008, 08:49:06 pm »
and here is chapter 29!

Will you all forgive me if we get a bit of a mystery/crime mixed in with our story now?

http://louisev.livejournal.com/283222.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #115 on: November 30, 2008, 09:44:41 pm »
and here is chapter 29!

Will you all forgive me if we get a bit of a mystery/crime mixed in with our story now?

http://louisev.livejournal.com/283222.html


Nothing to forgive, Louise.  They wouldn't be the real Ellery and Colson if trouble didn't follow them, or if the phone didn't keep interrupting them, no matter how far from home they are!  :laugh:

Poor, sweet, earnest Jeremy!  He was so worried.

Tell Wes hi an don’t call me neither.”

I'd like to hear that conversation!  LOL!  And this should also be an interesting night at Rich's....

Thanks!
Marie
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #116 on: November 30, 2008, 11:46:10 pm »

Nothing to forgive, Louise.  They wouldn't be the real Ellery and Colson if trouble didn't follow them, or if the phone didn't keep interrupting them, no matter how far from home they are!  :laugh:

Poor, sweet, earnest Jeremy!  He was so worried.

Tell Wes hi an don’t call me neither.”

I'd like to hear that conversation!  LOL!  And this should also be an interesting night at Rich's....

Thanks!
Marie

and if you didn't notice, the phone calls aren't catching them in the middle as much as right before!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #117 on: December 04, 2008, 02:03:35 am »
ok folks.  I have figured out who the love interest for Paula is going to be!!! muah hahahaha ! Stay tuned.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #118 on: December 05, 2008, 03:37:15 pm »
ok folks.  I have figured out who the love interest for Paula is going to be!!! muah hahahaha ! Stay tuned.

Well, the "muah hahahaha" has me racking my brain, Louise!  Unless it's someone we haven't met before?

I'm happy for Paula, but maybe I'm being presumptuous.   :-\

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Re: In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #119 on: December 05, 2008, 06:12:03 pm »
Well, the "muah hahahaha" has me racking my brain, Louise!  Unless it's someone we haven't met before?

I'm happy for Paula, but maybe I'm being presumptuous.   :-\

Marie

you keep wracking, Marie!  I am going to try to work on the chapter tonight.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”