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**WOOOWEEE, Mr. Raymille, thanks for keeping us on track!**
« Last Edit: June 25, 2006, 07:25:40 pm by littleguitar »
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

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**Ok, it looks like we are back on track now...  thanks to Mr. Raymille!**

==Next up:  Young Jack, Young Ennis, Elk==
==Daytime==
==elk killing scene==
==Take One!==


Then the clouds opened up and God said, "I hate you, Alfafa."

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« Last Edit: June 25, 2006, 10:24:39 pm by atz75 »
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((The wee hours of the mornin' just as the sun is coming up - sometime before the shooting of the ELK))

YOUNG JACK:

((heads back down to camp with rifle in hand, whistling a tune to himself))

((When he gets down to camp, heads over to the tent. Ennis has overslept, again!))

Ennis? You up, yet?

((Goes back over to the LOW-STARTLE POINT HORSE and draws out his rifle, checks to see that its loaded.))
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Why do we accept what we accept?
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((In the distance grazing peacefully....))

~A good general knows when to retreat~

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« Last Edit: June 25, 2006, 08:21:22 pm by Ray »
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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YOUNG ENNIS:

((Climbs out of tent, looking disheveled.))

Sorry bud, I was having this dream...

((Mentally slaps himself in the face.))

I mean, uh, sorry I overslept. Ready for your lesson?

((YOUNG JACK climbs on LOW STARTLE POINT HORSE, YOUNG ENNIS climbs on CIGAR BUTT. Both ride away from camp.))
« Last Edit: June 25, 2006, 08:35:51 pm by cmr107 »

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YOUNG JACK:

((as they are riding))

You brought somethin' to practice with, right..? Empty whisky bottles?

((smiles))

I mean, I know we got somethin to shoot at, just for practice.

((suddenly overcome by a rather heated thought, looks away and grins wickedly))

You practice shootin' a lot?
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YOUNG ENNIS:

(Oblivious to wicked grin.)

Yeah, brought empty whiskey bottles. I practice once in a while, when I'm not too busy on a ranch somewhere.

((They arrive at a clearing.))

Guess this is a good enough place.

((Sets up whiskey bottles across the clearing, goes back over to Jack.))

Why don't you go ahead an' try, I'll watch and see what yer doin' wrong.

%% I'll watch? What's my problem? %%
« Last Edit: June 25, 2006, 08:59:12 pm by cmr107 »