Author Topic: THE PERFORMANCE THREAD aside ((action)) %%thought%% (Read 1964013 times)

littleguitar · « **Reply #680 on:** June 25, 2006, 07:20:44 pm »

**WOOOWEEE, Mr. Raymille, thanks for keeping us on track!**

cmr107 · « **Reply #681 on:** June 25, 2006, 07:26:29 pm »

%% Why would any producer ever want to replace a director like this?! %%

welliwont · « **Reply #682 on:** June 25, 2006, 07:27:07 pm »

Quote from: Ray on June 25, 2006, 06:45:03 pm

**Ok, it looks like we are back on track now... thanks to Mr. Raymille!**

==Next up: Young Jack, Young Ennis, Elk==
==Daytime==
==elk killing scene==
==Take One!==

Brown Eyes · « **Reply #683 on:** June 25, 2006, 07:49:58 pm »

Quote from: JakeTwist on June 25, 2006, 07:27:07 pm

==Daytime==

Daniel · « **Reply #684 on:** June 25, 2006, 07:52:03 pm »

((The wee hours of the mornin' just as the sun is coming up - sometime before the shooting of the ELK))

YOUNG JACK:

((heads back down to camp with rifle in hand, whistling a tune to himself))

((When he gets down to camp, heads over to the tent. Ennis has overslept, again!))

Ennis? You up, yet?

((Goes back over to the LOW-STARTLE POINT HORSE and draws out his rifle, checks to see that its loaded.))

Ray · « **Reply #685 on:** June 25, 2006, 08:01:26 pm »

((In the distance grazing peacefully....))

Ray · « **Reply #686 on:** June 25, 2006, 08:19:33 pm »

((..and somewhere in Aus..))

cmr107 · « **Reply #687 on:** June 25, 2006, 08:33:17 pm »

YOUNG ENNIS:

((Climbs out of tent, looking disheveled.))

Sorry bud, I was having this dream...

((Mentally slaps himself in the face.))

I mean, uh, sorry I overslept. Ready for your lesson?

((YOUNG JACK climbs on LOW STARTLE POINT HORSE, YOUNG ENNIS climbs on CIGAR BUTT. Both ride away from camp.))

Daniel · « **Reply #688 on:** June 25, 2006, 08:40:39 pm »

YOUNG JACK:

((as they are riding))

You brought somethin' to practice with, right..? Empty whisky bottles?

((smiles))

I mean, I know we got somethin to shoot at, just for practice.

((suddenly overcome by a rather heated thought, looks away and grins wickedly))

You practice shootin' a lot?

cmr107 · « **Reply #689 on:** June 25, 2006, 08:53:56 pm »

YOUNG ENNIS:

(Oblivious to wicked grin.)

Yeah, brought empty whiskey bottles. I practice once in a while, when I'm not too busy on a ranch somewhere.

((They arrive at a clearing.))

Guess this is a good enough place.

((Sets up whiskey bottles across the clearing, goes back over to Jack.))

Why don't you go ahead an' try, I'll watch and see what yer doin' wrong.

%% I'll watch? What's my problem? %%

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