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moremojo

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #50 on: August 25, 2006, 07:17:32 pm »
The girls and the son
Innocent, unwitting seed
Spilled far from true love.
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #51 on: August 30, 2006, 09:34:56 pm »
Cowboy's tired feet
Bearing weary body up
Till dusk falls, gently.
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #52 on: August 31, 2006, 05:24:36 pm »
Death parts ways, brings light
To the hearts of absent friends
Remembering Truth
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #53 on: August 31, 2006, 11:47:26 pm »
Asian Art Museum,
an old shoe; an afternoon
with Shuggy: magic!

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #54 on: September 01, 2006, 09:32:57 am »
Shuggy from NZ
Made it to San Francisco
To meet online friends?
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #55 on: September 01, 2006, 11:36:43 am »
Aye, that he did, friend!
back to NZ and his man
beginning of week...
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #56 on: September 05, 2006, 12:09:56 pm »
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Death parts ways, brings light
To the hearts of absent friends
Remembering Truth

WOW, Moremojo!
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #57 on: September 05, 2006, 09:41:42 pm »
Ennis with Jack

Sunflower, golden
petels opening to the
warmth of a first spring.

Jack with Ennis

"O thou weed, that smellst
so sweet,  the senses ache at
 thee," wild columbine.

(quote from Othello;  wild columbine also is called honeysuckle.)
 
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #58 on: September 12, 2006, 11:59:42 am »
(someone said Jack and Ennis would find the previous two haikuis "somewhat puzzling." I didn';t WRITE therm for Jack and Ennis! I wrotre them for you guys....if everything we writte has to be understood by Jack and Ennis, what the hell are they going to make of John Donne, Pablo Naruda and Tobias Hume? Blank verse? Sonnets? Jeez...is everyone laughing at me?)
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #59 on: September 12, 2006, 12:25:04 pm »
Sonnets sing structure
Blank verse rides the open range
Haiku seek shelter
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