Author Topic: A Love Born From Steel - Ongoing Discussion  (Read 73011 times)

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Re: Chapter 12: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #160 on: May 11, 2006, 06:17:57 pm »
Les-

Taking it into a meeting to read!  You are keeping me a happy head! O0


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Re: Chapter 12: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #161 on: May 11, 2006, 06:57:42 pm »
Girl, you knocked it out of the park again.  Keep it up, Dr. Leslie ;)
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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #162 on: May 12, 2006, 07:40:06 pm »
hey FOLJKS--chapter 12 is out, and we got a whiff of trouble...

Right here is River City, and it starts with T and it rhymes with P, and it stands for Trouble..hope it isn't the end of the world..shouldn't be. hey, I hear Vermont is a real nice state...

Love ya and yer guys...
Remember what Ennis said, at the beginning: it's better to die while yer livin' than befroe ya start..more fun that way.

Hope it doesn't come to that.


Ya gotta keep up with Leslie; she'll hatch out another one berfore you can turn your head.
« Last Edit: May 12, 2006, 08:14:04 pm by julie01 »
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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #163 on: May 12, 2006, 07:46:10 pm »
Another nice chapter.  I like to read Ennis and Jack's everyday life.  The conversation between Ennis and Jenny was handled very well.

I am wondering how long Leslie is going to keep this nice and sweet feeling going before she drops some bomb on us.  The more I am getting used to their sweet life, the more I feel something nasty is coming.  Am I the only one feeling this way?

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #164 on: May 12, 2006, 08:10:28 pm »
jenny--you might try reading the post RIGHT ABOVE yours... :'(
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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #165 on: May 15, 2006, 03:01:02 am »
Sorry Julie :P.  Did not read your post carefully.

It's all in Leslie's hands now.

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #166 on: May 15, 2006, 02:35:25 pm »
Hi Everyone,

Chapter 13 is up....

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/14/

As I always say, comments and feedback are welcome. Please consider posting a review at the fanfic site. Thanks again for your ongoing support!

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A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 13
« Reply #167 on: May 15, 2006, 02:41:15 pm »
Hi Everyone,

Chapter 13 is up....

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/14/

As I always say, comments and feedback are welcome. Please consider posting a review at the fanfic site. Thanks again for your ongoing support!

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Re: A Love Born From Steel: Chapter 13
« Reply #168 on: May 15, 2006, 02:52:24 pm »
Leslie--

I'd take the laptop into the tub but I guess I'll go to the sofa with a pillow--but of course, the newest Chapter is all that is needed, and I'd lie down between Lexington and Third Avenue if that's all I had--

I'm there!

Thanks!

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Re: A Love Born From Steel
« Reply #169 on: May 15, 2006, 03:22:52 pm »
Can’t wait to read the next chapter.  I want to know what’s the big secrete that got Tom up in Lazy L, and if Ennis and Jack have some problems with the business loan.

I know I said that there must be challenges ahead, but it’s still hard when you have to face it (read it in this case)  :'(.

Is Ennis telling the truth when he said “Sometimes. Not too much. It hurt too much, made me sad, thinkin’ ‘bout ya so hard.”  I am thinking the “I sure wrang it out a hunderd times thinkin about you” line in the short story.