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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #10 on: January 14, 2009, 05:50:32 pm »

Hi Loreen!

I just discovered this thread.  And, I wanted to add my welcome!  It was fun seeing you at the viewing/chat!  What a great experience that was.

I'm looking forward to checking out your story.  I'm at work right now, but when I get home I'll take a look!
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Nice to meetcha Loreen!


Thanks guys! You're great!








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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #11 on: February 20, 2009, 07:27:53 pm »


Just wanted to tell you that there's a new chapter posted - please try link a few times. Few Brokies told me that the link is "shaky".

Here it is:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/1844.html

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http://loreent.livejournal.com

In short: After spending few months in LF, Jack went to Riverton to find Ennis, but he wasn't there. Jack decided to find Ennis by all means and ask if he would go to Texas with him ....


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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #12 on: March 22, 2009, 05:49:56 pm »
Hi there!

Hm... I see that there's not so much respond to this story here ???, but well.... for those who wants to know-  here's the link for the new chapter posted few days ago:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/2131.html


Ennis came back to Riverton and had to face the reality.... until one Sunday morning... :)

Any feedback is truly appreciated. ::)


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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #13 on: March 24, 2009, 12:40:14 pm »
Hi,

This is the first time I've heard of this story, and quite like it! Just read Chapter 3, so I'll have to backtrack a bit. Thanks for posting about it here.

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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #14 on: March 25, 2009, 06:20:58 pm »
Hi,

This is the first time I've heard of this story, and quite like it! Just read Chapter 3, so I'll have to backtrack a bit. Thanks for posting about it here.

Thanks dear!  :)

Hm... what does it mean that you'll have to "backtrack"?  ???

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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #15 on: May 03, 2009, 03:05:43 am »
OK, now!

I posted the first part of the 5. chapter ("The Reunion"). Jack came to Ennis's home after 3 years and invites him to the "fishing" trip....   ::)

The second part of the chapter will be posted  next week(I hope ).

As always, I was advised by MPJ  Flower, and the text was edited by tpe  Flower. Thank you friends!

Also as always , feedback - highly appreciated!   :P

Here's the link: http://loreent.livejournal.com/5296.html

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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #16 on: May 04, 2009, 07:28:13 pm »
OK, now!

I posted the first part of the 5. chapter ("The Reunion"). Jack came to Ennis's home after 3 years and invites him to the "fishing" trip....   ::)

The second part of the chapter will be posted  next week(I hope ).

As always, I was advised by MPJ  Flower, and the text was edited by tpe  Flower. Thank you friends!

Also as always , feedback - highly appreciated!   :P

Here's the link: http://loreent.livejournal.com/5296.html

Thanks for the heads-up.  I'll read and comment as soon as I can.  Thanks so much for posting!  :)

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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #17 on: May 19, 2009, 11:08:05 am »
Thanks for the heads-up.  I'll read and comment as soon as I can.  Thanks so much for posting!  :)

Hi! Thanks Littlewing! :)

Hope that you like the story. It is a long way ahead of them, but the happy ending is waiting!

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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #18 on: May 19, 2009, 11:10:57 am »
I didn't post this on time, so here's the 5. chapter 2. part:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/5484.html

and the 6.chapter, 1. part:

http://loreent.livejournal.com/6015.html

The 2. part of the 6. chapter will be posted very soon... in  few days.

Well, know that people ar not fond of posting feedback, still I love them! Can't help myself! ;D

Until the next chapter - see ya!
And thanks everyone for reading it!

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Re: Returning to Brokeback
« Reply #19 on: May 28, 2009, 02:32:53 pm »
http://loreent.livejournal.com/6387.html

OK, that's the link for the 2. part of the 6. chapter.

The chapter deals with Ennis's and Jack's "normal lives"... There's a little surprise in the end...

A huge thanks goes to MyPrivateJack and Flwrchild for advising and editing, respectively. Really appreciate your help friends!

Synopsis: The story starts during SNIT as my personal wish to fulfill the blanks in the movie. After cca 10 years or angst and suffer, in the end Ennis &Jack's sweet life is even sweeter than the chocolate (LOL) !Some surprises, some romantics, some sex and a lots of emotions...

A big thanks for everyone who's still with me and this story...

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