Author Topic: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale  (Read 67324 times)

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #30 on: March 15, 2009, 03:33:51 pm »
Gosh Louise, fantastic stuff! Thank you so much for continuing to share your talents with us!  :-*





The insight into all the characters we've known for so long is great. I bet dr. Henry never thought his new job would be this interesting.

Hope Ellery's pain medication kicks in soon. And Colson gets there. These two haven't had it easy have they?  :-\

« Last Edit: March 16, 2009, 03:36:41 am by belbbmfan »
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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #31 on: March 15, 2009, 04:16:51 pm »
hey Fabienne, hope things are going better for you.

And I have a little Sunday gift for y'all!

Chapter 10:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/290710.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #32 on: March 15, 2009, 04:47:50 pm »
SPOILERS





I bet dr. Henry never thought his new job would be this interesting.

You can say that again!  And it looks like he's going to be talking to Dupree soon - and I'm betting "interesting" will be an understatement for the conversation!

I'm glad Edna drove Colson to the hospital, but I was really relieved when Colson pullled the medical POA out of his wallet!  That's been in the back of my mind since the story started.  Colson's thoughts were so realistic and heart-wrenching.  I'm hoping when the nurse replied "yes" to Colson's question, she was referring to the "or something"! 

LOL that Colson immediately thought of whiskey when Wes mentioned wetting their whistles!  Thanks for the quick updates, Louise, you've got us champing at the bit!

Marie


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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #33 on: March 15, 2009, 06:38:01 pm »
 
Heheheh well don't champ at the bit too long!  I'm working on the next chapter!!!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #34 on: March 15, 2009, 07:20:19 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #35 on: March 15, 2009, 08:44:51 pm »
You are spoiling us!  :D


SPOILERS






Aw, I just wanted to give Jeremy a big ol' hug.  He's such a good person and so damn earnest.  I'm glad he got along so well with Henry and that he'll be talking to him again.  It would hurt Jeremy so badly to be reassigned - I hope they can find another solution ....

Joe's talk with Henry was enlightening as well.  With the center of gravity gone from the department, things are spinning out of control quickly!  Looks like the good doctor got there just in time.  And, yes, I'm sure Reynolds has lists, and maybe a few charts, too!

Terrific, Louise!
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #36 on: March 15, 2009, 08:47:13 pm »
Okay, I'm spoiling you all too much, I'll stop!

“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #37 on: March 15, 2009, 09:31:37 pm »
Okay, I'm spoiling you all too much, I'll stop!



 :laugh:  Well, only for tonight, I hope!  Although if you really felt like writing another chapter tonight, I don't think anyone would mind being spoiled some more....
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #38 on: March 15, 2009, 10:42:14 pm »
changing your mind are you?

Fickle women!

It's getting a little late to pull out another chapter, I'm afraid.  This is my reading time!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
« Reply #39 on: March 16, 2009, 09:39:37 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”