Author Topic: Gift of Exile - first fanfic  (Read 36003 times)

Marge_Innavera

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Re: Gift of Exile - first fanfic
« Reply #110 on: October 28, 2011, 08:54:23 am »
Chapter 33 of my forever-in-progress Minnesota fanfic.  Ennis realizes he's made a mistake and tries to win David back via his first-ever same-sex date:

Chapter 33:  http://talkstocoyotes.livejournal.com/11931.html   
Notes/Index, Chapter 33:  http://talkstocoyotes.livejournal.com/12217.html   

The "notes" entry is due to this chapter being quite long.  Links to info about the Rustic Inn Cafe, one of the North Shore's longest-running restaurants, and Split Rock Lighthouse.

Marge_Innavera

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Re: Gift of Exile - first fanfic
« Reply #111 on: November 22, 2011, 08:02:50 pm »

Chapter 34:

"Jack stood at the edge of a low bluff, looking down at the river and the log bridge.  He was smoking and his face was troubled and serious.  It was high summer, the grass on the slopes growing a little darker and the constant wind a little warmer.  The smoke from Jackís cigarette swirled over his head idly, unaffected by the ceaseless Wyoming wind, which didnít lift the brim of  his hat even slightly  The surroundings on Brokeback were real enough but a hiker, camper or sheep herder would not have been able to see him."


http://talkstocoyotes.livejournal.com/12435.html