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louisev:
 
And without further ado, and a week after I started my little fitness vacation, here is the opening chapter of "Agents of the Law."

http://louisev.livejournal.com/320888.html

mariez:

--- Quote from: louisev on July 25, 2009, 06:57:56 pm ---
And without further ado, and a week after I started my little fitness vacation, here is the opening chapter of "Agents of the Law."

http://louisev.livejournal.com/320888.html

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And we're off!   Yay!!  Don't tell the other boys, but I think I've developed a crush on Joe!   :laugh:  That was so great getting to see him at home and it's clear he really does take enjoyment in his children.  I love how he relates to Jeremiah - he'll make a great lawyer for sure  :)  I'm glad Wes is going to "sleep on it" - it's a tricky situation.  And I hope the fact that Dupree said the free time was making him nuts doesn't mean he and Nicky were arguing the whole time  :-\

 :laugh: at "Mormon" Park becoming private property!  Thanks, Louise!

louisev:

--- Quote from: mariez on July 25, 2009, 08:46:15 pm ---And we're off!   Yay!!  Don't tell the other boys, but I think I've developed a crush on Joe!   :laugh:  That was so great getting to see him at home and it's clear he really does take enjoyment in his children.  I love how he relates to Jeremiah - he'll make a great lawyer for sure  :)  I'm glad Wes is going to "sleep on it" - it's a tricky situation.  And I hope the fact that Dupree said the free time was making him nuts doesn't mean he and Nicky were arguing the whole time  :-\

 :laugh: at "Mormon" Park becoming private property!  Thanks, Louise!

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little private joke about being "ripped from the headlines!"  Glad to see everyone so enthused about a sequel!

louisev:
Agents of the law, Chapter 2: and it's not even noon yet!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/321158.html

mariez:

--- Quote from: louisev on July 26, 2009, 12:40:41 pm ---Agents of the law, Chapter 2: and it's not even noon yet!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/321158.html

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Well, they were all in rare form, weren't they?   :laugh:  And Ellery "Mr. Diplomacy" Cantrell talking about how Dupree and Esteban aren't "diplomatic" is priceless!   :laugh:  But, oh boy, Jeremy and Esteban working together - Henry's going to have his work cut out for him.  But who knows?  It might be the best thing for them.  At least Nick won't be jealous of Esteban! 

But I'm afraid Wes may have a big "I told you so" thrown in his face regarding Lewis Stevens!

And, yeah, it's probably a good idea for Colson to go back to work  :-\   Poor boys.  Even the "Queer Book of Sex Etiquette" can't help them!  :laugh:  Thanks, Louise!

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