Author Topic: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot  (Read 6141 times)

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Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« on: October 02, 2006, 09:33:03 am »
One of our Bettermost members has taken pen to paper and come up with this little tale:

Ennis on the Couch

Chapter 1: http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/450643.html#cutid1

Chapter 2: http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/470833.html?#cutid1

Chapter 3: http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/493943.html?#cutid1

Chapter 4: http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/512958.html?#cutid1

Chapter 5: http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/536258.html#cutid1

Chapter 6: http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/557058.html?#cutid1

I haven't read this carefully, but the skimming I have done, it is an intriguing story! Enjoy...

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Re: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2006, 09:57:22 am »
I have read it, I like it, and I recommend it!

“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2006, 01:57:55 pm »

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Re: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« Reply #3 on: October 02, 2006, 02:50:17 pm »
I've been seeing this one around brokebackslash, but hadn't had a chance to read it yet... I think I'll start it tonight!
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« Reply #4 on: October 08, 2006, 05:48:27 pm »
Another - slightly shorter than usual - chapter.  I hope to post again this week  :)

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/663256.html#cutid1

Hope people enjoy and I appreciate any and all feedback - it helps enormously in writing and plotting further chapters  :D

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Re: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« Reply #5 on: October 12, 2006, 02:33:38 pm »
Thanks for posting Merrobot, I like your style of writing! Am now at ch. 5 so I still have some chapters to read!

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Re: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« Reply #6 on: October 15, 2006, 08:05:49 pm »
RL has tried soooo hard to stop me writing this week  ::)

But I have defied it!!  So here it is....Chapter 11

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/682450.html#cutid1

Hope folks are still enjoying it but I know I'm not 100% at the moment so any and all feedback is much appreciated  :D

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Re: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« Reply #7 on: October 19, 2006, 05:59:37 pm »
Thank you again for all the comments that people have left for me - they are very much appreciated :D

Another chapter (links provided to the previous ones)

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/693021.html#cutid1

I hope people enjoy.  Pity I have to go back to work next week  ;)

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Re: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« Reply #8 on: October 28, 2006, 07:19:10 pm »
The latest update:

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/693021.html#cutid1

Feedback welcome as always - hope people enjoy  :D

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Re: Ennis on the Couch -- by Merrobot
« Reply #9 on: November 05, 2006, 05:14:30 am »
The next chapter can be found here:

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/740009.html#cutid1

Hope people enjoy  :D