Mornin'.
Well, everything I'd hoped for and more. These two are wonderful with each other. Ennis experiencing new things, which to Jack aren't new...he still has his Doubletree discount card! Went to the hotel website...nice place to stay.
Scott was the perfect "barber." Great scene. Jack almost helpless; did they ever shave off the moustache? Good banter back and forth... with Scott pitching in at the right points.
Now, time to don the suits and shirts, and head out on the town. Will be interesting to see them in the club that Charles at Macy's recommended.
Still need the silver, though, for the 25th. Read the snippet in the DRABBLE thread; great start...looking forward to the full chapter.
Like how you write the narrative in the present tense. It's like directions for a play or movie, and brings the action forward.
Did find a few things I corrected when I downloaded the chapter. If you want, I'ld be happy to help beta for you.
Thanks again.