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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #10 on: October 30, 2006, 03:58:16 pm »
Sorry I'm late with the link.  You guys have probably all found it already, but here it is.

To Be Alone With You, Chapter 2

http://marakeshsparrow.livejournal.com/29549.html#cutid1

Enjoy!
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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #11 on: November 03, 2006, 12:06:12 pm »
That was a really good chapter, we really did get a closer look at what kind of person Jack is. Looking forward to the rest...
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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #12 on: November 03, 2006, 01:25:21 pm »
I'm still reading this although Jess has said it's going to be a Sad!Fic.   :(  At least I'm steeled for it all ending terribly.

But hope there will be lots of love and wonderfulness in the meantime.
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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #13 on: November 04, 2006, 09:47:47 am »
Quote from: one_of_one on November 03, 2006, 01:25:21 pm
I'm still reading this although Jess has said it's going to be a Sad!Fic.   :(  At least I'm steeled for it all ending terribly.

But hope there will be lots of love and wonderfulness in the meantime.

 :'( :'( :'(
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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #14 on: November 10, 2006, 02:32:52 am »
Chapter 3 is up, folks.
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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #15 on: November 14, 2006, 01:38:05 am »
Sorry!  I'm really falling behind on this!

To Be Alone With You, Chapter 3

http://marakeshsparrow.livejournal.com/30423.html#cutid1

Enjoy!  ;D ;D ;D
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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #16 on: November 14, 2006, 01:39:40 am »
And...

To Be Alone With You, Chapter 4

http://marakeshsparrow.livejournal.com/30597.html#cutid1

Sorry 'bout falling behind with the linkees!  Hope to have Chap 5 up later this week!  ;) ;)
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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #17 on: November 16, 2006, 03:26:30 pm »
I'm really wondering if I will be able to find any sympathy for your Jack, especially since now we got a taste of how he treats people and because he tried to justify what had happened by saying that he never actually killed anybody himself. But, that really makes your story very interesting. He really is a very flawed and wounded character. Wonderful dialogue and character development!
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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #18 on: November 18, 2006, 02:05:30 pm »
Some of you are very picky in the comopany you keep! I have two friends who have killed people--of course, one has been dead since 1966..but he was a great guy.

People CHANGE...

Mo'

(And how about MadLori's new story? Already Jack is no longer horrified by D's killing people)

marakeshsparrow has told us that "this is not a happy fanfic," so I guess we can assume that a reconing will come eventually. Oh, the "great guy" spent most of his life in prisons (lucky prisons!)
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Re: To Be Alone With You by Marakeshsparrow
« Reply #19 on: November 20, 2006, 04:15:00 pm »
Quote from: twistedude on November 18, 2006, 02:05:30 pm
Some of you are very picky in the comopany you keep! I have two friends who have killed people--of course, one has been dead since 1966..but he was a great guy.

People CHANGE...

Mo'

(And how about MadLori's new story? Already Jack is no longer horrified by D's killing people)

marakeshsparrow has told us that "this is not a happy fanfic," so I guess we can assume that a reconing will come eventually. Oh, the "great guy" spent most of his life in prisons (lucky prisons!)

This post doesn't make any sense!  ???

Who said what, and why are you so angry about it?

I just can't figure it out.  :-\
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