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Offline Lynne

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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1510 on: October 03, 2007, 11:25:22 am »
Awesome photos of your hike, friend.  (((waving to Judy - me too, me too!!))

And damn, that poem is perfect.  Love it.  :-*
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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1511 on: October 03, 2007, 11:32:46 am »
and he thinks my stuff is good.


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Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1512 on: October 03, 2007, 11:45:11 am »
Quote from: CellarDweller on October 03, 2007, 11:32:46 am
and he thinks my stuff is good.


 ::)

Please post the one you wrote this morning, Chuckie!
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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1513 on: October 03, 2007, 11:45:50 am »
Quote from: loneleeb3 on October 03, 2007, 11:22:06 am
That was beautiful!
Dang, my friends are so taleneted!!  ;D

Give it a try, bro, can't be no worse'n me.
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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1514 on: October 03, 2007, 11:57:13 am »
Quote from: Shakestheground on October 03, 2007, 11:14:06 am
We stood outside the diner.
Making small talk to fill the void,
Of pregnant pauses,
And tings we lacked the nerve for.

A hug, a squeeze,
In public I'd dare not much more
He turned to go and I waited,
Yes, he turned around and looked back.

I am in love.
I have always been this way.
The sun has always shown,
The rain has always been warm.

The songs on the radio
Are not the same as yesterday
The ride home,
Was never this beautiful.

I waited to see,
He turned around.
He had a smile.
And it was just for me.

If he only knew
If he only felt
Outside that diner
What was in my heart

If he only heard
If he only saw
Standing there in public
What was in my heart

Why did I turn around
Why did I not just leave
I am in love
I have always been this way

I smiled at him
If he only knew
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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1515 on: October 03, 2007, 11:59:07 am »
Quote from: Shakestheground on October 03, 2007, 11:45:50 am
Give it a try, bro, can't be no worse'n me.
Yes I can. LOL
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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1516 on: October 03, 2007, 12:21:14 pm »
Quote from: Shakestheground on October 03, 2007, 11:45:11 am
Please post the one you wrote this morning, Chuckie!


My original plan is one a day for now, but since you've asked, sure.

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Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1517 on: October 03, 2007, 01:07:15 pm »
I love the way you tell a story and the pictures are way cool too.  Beautiful heartfelt poems, I just love them.  Although its getting late, as Ive been here for hours reading and drinking my coffee, this is a wonderful way to start my day!  Thanks
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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1518 on: October 03, 2007, 01:12:12 pm »
Quote from: Scott on October 03, 2007, 11:57:13 am
If he only knew
If he only felt
Outside that diner
What was in my heart

If he only heard
If he only saw
Standing there in public
What was in my heart

Why did I turn around
Why did I not just leave
I am in love
I have always been this way

I smiled at him
If he only knew

A little tear comes,
Always to my right eye first,
My heart jumps,
Then warms.

He is he, and miles between us.
He stokes the head of a pidgeon,
And sets it free,
To land upon my windowsil.

Could I but shrink the space,
Turn back years
Shout a warning,
I would.

No matter now.
He loves me.
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Re: Shakesthegrounds Rumblings
« Reply #1519 on: October 03, 2007, 01:29:25 pm »
Quote from: Shakestheground on October 03, 2007, 01:12:12 pm
A little tear comes,
Always to my right eye first,
My heart jumps,
Then warms.

He is he, and miles between us.
He stokes the head of a pidgeon,
And sets it free,
To land upon my windowsil.

Could I but shrink the space,
Turn back years
Shout a warning,
I would.

No matter now.
He loves me.


Were the past just that
But I fear it remains as a brand
Deep in my skin
Yet I will not weep

Were you just a friend
I could wander then return
Nothing between us changed
We know this is not our lot

Were I more foolish
And less foolish
The vistas of eternity
Would be open to us

Were we?
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