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Offline DeeDee

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If you were the writer......
« on: April 12, 2006, 04:01:14 pm »
Ok now you know I'm bored.  We had a post with our favorite "wordless moments".
How about we take some of these moments and put thoughts in their heads as if we were the writers.

For example:

When Jack is leaning against the truck in the beginning, looking at Ennis.maybe he's thinking..
"damn, this heres a hot one".

I would love to read how you guys think.  You're a bunch of talented people, so I know this stuff is gonna be good.
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Re: If you were the writer......
« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2006, 05:45:12 pm »
Come on you guys...come out and play..
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Re: If you were the writer......
« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2006, 02:49:44 pm »
- When Jack is listening to Ennis open up for the very first time up on Brokeback, he lowers his head slightly, listening to Ennis' sad tale of his life, I think he was thinking:
"Oh Shit!  What I wouldn't do to jump on him right now and give him a big ol' hug...Look at those eyes and those lips..gosh, I hope he doesn't notice my d!!k getting bigger ... calm down Jack, calm down,...", then he turns and says to Ennis: "Friend, that's the most words you've spoke in the past 2 weeks"

- After waiting anxiously for Jack's arrival the day of their reunion, Ennis was thoroughly wound up, what with the beer and chain-smoking, I bet when he rushed out the door and saw jack standing there, he was thinking:
"Jesus H, that boy looks fine!  No more wringing out lil Ennis, I am so getting proper laid tonight...!"...

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Re: If you were the writer......
« Reply #3 on: April 15, 2006, 04:42:55 pm »
 :laugh:  little Ennis?   ROTF
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Re: If you were the writer......
« Reply #4 on: April 15, 2006, 08:51:36 pm »
Quote from: DeeDee on April 15, 2006, 04:42:55 pm
:laugh:  little Ennis?   ROTF

Ya! :)
I think he'd rather wring out lil Jack..;)
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Re: If you were the writer......
« Reply #5 on: April 15, 2006, 08:58:02 pm »
Quote from: lucise on April 15, 2006, 08:51:36 pm
Quote from: DeeDee on April 15, 2006, 04:42:55 pm
:laugh:  little Ennis?   ROTF

Ya! :)
I think he'd rather wring out lil Jack..;)


Wouldn't we all?   :P
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Re: If you were the writer......
« Reply #6 on: April 16, 2006, 02:49:43 am »
Jack while Ennis is washing.

"Potatoes.  Think potatoes.  Don't look.  Don't fcking look!  Peel.  Breathe.  Peel."
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Re: If you were the writer......
« Reply #7 on: April 16, 2006, 04:36:13 pm »
Quote from: kirkmusic on April 16, 2006, 02:49:43 am
Jack while Ennis is washing.

"Potatoes.  Think potatoes.  Don't look.  Don't fcking look!  Peel.  Breathe.  Peel."

LMAO..... that is funny :laugh:
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Re: If you were the writer......
« Reply #8 on: April 17, 2006, 05:53:08 am »

Lureen at thanksgiving dinner table: "Hurrah!!! He finally grew some balls!"
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Re: If you were the writer......
« Reply #9 on: April 17, 2006, 12:31:51 pm »
Haha - great additions by Anke and Sheyne!

After Jack and Ennis reunite and share that unbelievably passionate kiss in that alley.. :o..they finally tear themselves away from each other and go up the stairs to say Hello to Alma. After Jack said "...married the prettiest lil girl in Childress Texas ... Lureen", he lowers his head and tries to keep his breathing stable.  I bet at that moment he is thinking:
"Someone get me outta here quick! Get me outta here before I explode!  Shit, my hands are shaking, Jesus H, he smells so fuckin' good ... stop starring at this crotch Jack, just look at his eyes Jack, eyes!" ...

Heavens knows how they actually made it to the motel in one piece..I might've crashed the car in anticipation!  ;)
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