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A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« on: February 20, 2007, 02:57:20 am »
...or Sienasta for this story. Ennis as a restaurant owner in Memphis, Jack as an actor filming a movie from a John Grisham novel there. As yet no smut and it's still hawt! She had me at hello...


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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2007, 10:10:10 am »
...or Sienasta for this story. Ennis as a restaurant owner in Memphis, Jack as an actor filming a movie from a John Grisham novel there. As yet no smut and it's still hawt! She had me at hello...


http://siennasta.livejournal.com/


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She has me hooked too, Roux! Totally! Thanks for starting this thread!  :-*
This whole story is WONDERFUL. I LOVE IT! Every single word! 

I love how she has Ennis and Jack thinking about each other all the time but trying desparately not to. In the last chapter I loved Jack just giving in and going to see Ennis at the restaurant. God, that whole scene at the bar was like nothing else!

This lines were just so great:

“Ever think maybe I want to buy you lunch?”

It was an opening... a really, really small one, but Jack took it anyway, knew it was all he was going to get.  He stood up, leaned over the bar towards Ennis. “I’d rather you bought it when you could eat it with me.”


The HOT sexual tension is amazing, they are so hot and horny for each other and the way she writes that just blows me away.     

These lines were also so so hot to me, just oozing sex..

Ennis pushed himself a little bit farther over the bar, till their faces were almost touching. At the last second, he angled to the side, let his mouth slide soft against Jack’s ear. “Do you really think anyone who saw us together would ever believe we’re just friends?” Ennis whispered. Jack could barely hear him, not because of the noise of the bar, but because of the sudden blood rush in his head, the over loud throb of his heart.... all caused just from the touch of his lips on his skin......     

Wow.

It's a wonderful story and I love it to death!



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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2007, 11:45:38 am »
I can't believe i still haven't read this one  :-\

Maybe that's what I'll do with my sick day today, I love her stories  :)
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #3 on: February 20, 2007, 01:08:53 pm »
I can't believe i still haven't read this one  :-\

Maybe that's what I'll do with my sick day today, I love her stories  :)

Aww yeah, you're sick  :( I read on Helen's journal that you have some kind of food poisoning??  :( That's just terrible, Mandy  :( I hope you feel better soon, I'll keep my fingers crossed  :)

And YES! Go read this one if you feel up to it! It's SO worth it  :)

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2007, 01:30:10 pm »
Aw thanks June! I'm not sure if it was food poisoning or some really bad flu. I went to the ER but came home before I got a diagnosis or anything because the wait was taking too long and I'd started feeling a bit better.

how did it end up on Helen's journal? or did I leave a comment that I'm not remembering... LOL I guess I've been pretty out of it...
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #5 on: February 20, 2007, 02:34:52 pm »
Hi Mandy...hope you feel better now.  Jane mentioned about it when she was leaving me a comment, I wondered why you hadn't been around for a few days.

I LOVE this story...she onlt posted the last chapter two days ago but I am refreshing refreshing refreshing in the hope of another.

I love both her stories and I loved Blue Ridge too.  So splendid!

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« Reply #6 on: February 20, 2007, 03:28:48 pm »
oh, ok, good... sheesh, I thought I was losing my mind and really had already posted a comment. It wouldn't surprise me. This morning I knew I had to call in sick to work and dreamt that I had done it already and thought that it was real. I didn't realize it was a dream until work called asking where the hell I was... LOL, clarity has not been my strong suit the past few days.

Ok, off to read this finally! I love her stories so much, and one day I'm going to go back and re read BoBR...
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #7 on: February 20, 2007, 03:42:20 pm »
Hope you feel better Mandy!

I am gonna start reading this tomorrow!  ;D

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #8 on: February 20, 2007, 04:52:50 pm »
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Jack as an actor filming a movie from a John Grisham novel there

ha! I just saw this... how perfect is that?? Memphis and John Grisham are forever entwined in my mind... plus, I met him at a book signing there  :D
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #9 on: February 21, 2007, 08:13:24 pm »
It is heating up in Memphis in this fac!  :P I am hooked on all Sienata' fics. This is another good one.

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #10 on: February 22, 2007, 10:49:52 am »
finally read it! I've been sneaking chapters in before work the past couple of days... I just finished the last two chapters!

Loved it! I don't have words right now... I'll have to come back later and elaborate, but man I loved it!

And suddenly find myself craving about 10 different kinds of food...
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #11 on: February 23, 2007, 09:05:48 pm »
Looky. She posted two more chapters today!

Talk about making us suffer.
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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #12 on: February 26, 2007, 04:35:57 pm »
I really like this story until now. I like the characterisations. The dialogue is snappy and vibrant, as with her other story, BFF! I really hope though, that she won't abandon BFF because of this story!!!! :o

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #13 on: February 26, 2007, 06:01:30 pm »
I'm with you, Mel. Especially about the characterizations. I think her Jack and Ennis are really unique. And there is something about her Jack that is so lonely... that scene where he sat in the bar just to talk to Ennis, then Ennis turned him away (even though I understand where Ennis is coming from) about broke my heart...
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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« Reply #14 on: February 26, 2007, 06:06:51 pm »
I'm with you, Mel. Especially about the characterizations. I think her Jack and Ennis are really unique. And there is something about her Jack that is so lonely... that scene where he sat in the bar just to talk to Ennis, then Ennis turned him away (even though I understand where Ennis is coming from) about broke my heart...

I know, I felt the same when I read it, he is so desperately looking for a connection and there it is and he (thinks he) can't do anything!

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #15 on: February 26, 2007, 06:13:15 pm »
Have you guys been reading the latest Sienata? ~ the one responsible for putting BFF and ALSE on hold ~ The 4-parter which started out as a 2 parter! It's brilliantly HOT and just wonderful  :)


http://sienata.livejournal.com/25296.html

http://sienata.livejournal.com/25532.html

http://sienata.livejournal.com/25683.html

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #16 on: February 26, 2007, 06:16:14 pm »
I haven't yet! I was planning on waiting until it is all posted since I know it will be finished after the 4th part... and I don't have anything to read tonight, so I'll read it all in one hunk.

Her stuff always makes me squeee!  :D
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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« Reply #17 on: February 26, 2007, 06:19:56 pm »

Her stuff always makes me squeee!  :D

And me, Mandy!! WOW ~ you're in for a HOT treat tonight!  ;D

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #18 on: February 26, 2007, 09:20:42 pm »
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Ah, is that what you call it?  ;) ;D

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #19 on: February 26, 2007, 09:38:31 pm »
Ah, is that what you call it?  ;) ;D

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I thought everyone called it that  ;) ROFL
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #20 on: February 28, 2007, 09:22:23 pm »
We do hope to see chapter 9 this week, maybe the boys will get some soon. LOL I do see how lonely Jack is and I hope they work this out.....

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #21 on: March 05, 2007, 11:56:17 am »
Hopefully an update today!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE  :P This is from replies to comments:

I want to go hang out at Ennis' too... let's plan to get there on Monday, noonish... I have a sneaking suspicion Jack is going to be showing up that day, maybe in his nifty little bicycle shorts! If we hurry, maybe we can sneak upstairs and hide in the bathroom and watch... all indications are it's gonna get pretty steamy!!!! but not from hot water!!!

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #22 on: March 05, 2007, 12:31:38 pm »
Hopefully an update today!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE  :P This is from replies to comments:

I want to go hang out at Ennis' too... let's plan to get there on Monday, noonish... I have a sneaking suspicion Jack is going to be showing up that day, maybe in his nifty little bicycle shorts! If we hurry, maybe we can sneak upstairs and hide in the bathroom and watch... all indications are it's gonna get pretty steamy!!!! but not from hot water!!!

June! That post just made my day!  ;D

I would LOVE an update of this!!!
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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« Reply #23 on: March 05, 2007, 07:13:07 pm »
Hey everyone, I just heard that Sienna hopes to post this Tuesday (oh, I just realized that's tomorrow!  :D)
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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« Reply #24 on: March 06, 2007, 04:29:07 am »
Thanks for letting us know!!!!!  :D

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« Reply #25 on: March 08, 2007, 01:59:11 am »
Evenin'.

Well, I'm hooked.  Swore I'd wait until you updated/completed BFF, but I missed your writing, checked out the first chapter, and, well, I'm hooked. 

Like the idea that Ennis knows he is gay, and so feels somewhat comfortable with Jack.  Some kinda role reversal, though, with Ennis "out" and Jack "in" to save his movie star status.  So many good things: the first meeting at his restaurant, the man he had fantasized over, flirting with him, meeting at night at the set.  Liked them shopping for stuff for Jack's place...how domestic...and the conversation at the check-out stand...what an appropriate name for the place for that conversation!  And the first time together...how the FNIT could have gone, if they were already comfortable with themselves, but Jack still the instigator.  Wonder how well-worn the path will be between their two places.  And what about the papparazi?

Glad you decided to go with this one.  Thanks.

Now, about BFF.....

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Re: A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
« Reply #26 on: March 10, 2007, 09:48:50 pm »
There have been several updates recently of this story, so make sure you see them all. There is some great moments (l Love sweet potato fries and I hate nosy neighbors) Jack is a spoiled movie star but also as sweet and vulnerable as only our Jack can be. Ennis is protective and hot, what more could anyone want?