Author Topic: RWYA, Altitude and Liberation by Mel  (Read 76629 times)

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Re: "Right where you are" by Mel. Chapter 10 up!
« Reply #20 on: April 03, 2007, 11:50:48 am »
I have finally thought of a pitch for my story (I know, a bit late...):

Right where you are is an AU story. It starts right after Jack and Ennis have parted ways in Signal and Ennis comes home to Alma. It then moves along to 1965. Ennis is married to Alma. Ennis can't stop thinking about Jack, and he thinks he will never see him again, but fate has something in store for the both of them.

Where are we now?
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Ennis and Alma have gotten married. Ennis finds a good job at a ranch. Alma has problems getting pregnant. Ennis obviously cannot stop thinking about Jack. Alma and Ennis go to a wedding in Cody and Ennis's world is turned upside-down again when he sees Jack there with his fiance Elly, Alma's cousin. They find some time to talk alone. Turns out Jack never left Lightning Flat, because his father died so he had to stay and manage the 'ranch'. He had to give up on his dream: rodeoing. Ennis and Alma end up visiting Jack and Elly in Lightning Flat a few weeks later. This is where their feelings for each other flare up again and spin out of control.


For those interested, I have just posted chapter 11:

http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/4710.html

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Re: Right where you are by Mel... Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #22 on: April 10, 2007, 01:22:18 pm »
Chapter 12 was nothing short of brilliant! Excellent work Melissa!

But I must admit, this last chapter has left me in suspense! I hope it won't be too long before chapter 13 is posted. I'm really worried about poor Ennis!
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Re: Right where you are by Mel... Chapter 12 up!
« Reply #23 on: April 17, 2007, 08:48:12 am »
Chapter 12 was nothing short of brilliant! Excellent work Melissa!

But I must admit, this last chapter has left me in suspense! I hope it won't be too long before chapter 13 is posted. I'm really worried about poor Ennis!

Thank you sweetie, and thanks for your help as always!!!

Chapter 13: http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/5380.html

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Re: Right Where You Are - AU by Mel
« Reply #24 on: May 02, 2007, 03:58:21 am »

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Re: Right Where You Are - AU by Mel
« Reply #25 on: May 08, 2007, 08:17:31 am »

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Re: Right Where You Are - AU by Mel
« Reply #26 on: May 08, 2007, 02:14:40 pm »
Hey Melissa!  :)

Chapter 15 was totally brilliant! I loved the way you described Jack and Ennis in this chapter. You did a really good job describing the mountains and forest too. I could alsmost smell the pine trees!

This is my favorite chapter so far, and I didn't want it to end.  :)

Goed zo!!  :D
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Re: Right Where You Are - AU by Mel
« Reply #27 on: May 15, 2007, 08:54:38 am »

I am not sure if I should still be posting here to let people know a new chapter is up. But if there is anybody out here who relies on these posts to find out if a new chapter is posted, let me know and I will continue to post new chapters here next to ennisjack and bbslash/wranglers.


Chapter 16 is now online: http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/7333.html

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Re: Right Where You Are - AU by Mel
« Reply #28 on: May 21, 2007, 09:57:57 am »
Warning - Possible Spoilers!

I started reading "Right Where You Are" today and after just one chapter I'm already hooked!   :o

I was in floods of tears at work today. I had to pretend I had a cold!  ::)

You write beautifully, Melissa. Congratulations! The pathos evoked in the shower scene was almost too much for me to bear!  :'(

Looking forward to reading Chapter 2 tomorrow!  :D
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Re: Right Where You Are - AU by Mel
« Reply #29 on: May 21, 2007, 10:06:02 pm »

I've just finished Chapter 4, Melissa.

I am absolutely loving "Right Where You Are." The cliff-hanger at the end of Chapter 3 was a knock-out. I found the family wedding meeting very believable and loved the scene in the cemetery. Beautifully written. Tears at work again!  :'(

On to Chapter 5 now!  :D
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