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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Dagi on June 10, 2007, 07:38:25 am ---Too Early In The Summer
< Beans. Beans beans beans. I´m sick of ´em.>
< Hmm...>
< Taste ain´t that bad, but ...mbmummbfrt....>
< Huh? Mumbling used to be my part. What´d ya say?>
< Said ´they make me fart.´>
< Um...well...> Ennis grins.
< I´ll run them sheep off if I go on like that. Maybe that´s why I ain´t shot me no coyote yet, ´cause they don´t come close enough with all that...gas around. Expect that goddamn puptent to take off like a balloon some night!>
Ennis laughes out loud, jerking his head back, eyes sparkling.
´This boy is f*uckin´too cute when he laughs...´
< Your guts don´t react like this, or what? >
< Hm, no, think they are used to beans. >
The cowboys go on eating in silence.
Ennis, sniffing : <Uh! What´s that? Was that you? >
< NO, MAN! Bud, I´d never fart as long as you´re around! Don´t want to run you off, friend! It wasn´t me! >
< Naw, me neither, told you I don´t fart, beans or no beans, it must´ve been you!>
Jack laughs, jumps up and over to Ennis, grabs his shirt, and tuzzling and laughing they fall on the ground -
curtains fall discretely...
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Dagi, this is so fun and playful. Thanks for showing us the level of comfort the boys had. I can image a lot of bodily functions that the 2 observed of the other, and how natural it felt. I really enjoyed reading this. Beautiful!
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 11:49:20 pm ---Outrageous Sargent Littlewing1957! This tale is so "X Files" I can almost see it on the show.
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:laugh: Thanks Toycoon, Baby! I may continue this, I don't know yet!
Luvlylittlewing:
Why thanks, Merr! :D
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 11:32:42 pm ---Thanks, littlewing1957! "A Surprise Gift" is the second part to "Carving a Horse". "Unexpected Feelings" is part three and your story is part four.
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Oh, Got ya! Thanks, Toycoon!
Luvlylittlewing:
“I hope you can finish what you’re startin!” It was Jack, trying to turn his arthritis ridden bones toward his love. “You still think you can satisfy me, old man?” Jack was only teasing as he placed a tender kiss on Ennis’ still luscious mouth.
“Just turn over, Rodeo, that is… if ya can!” Ennis laughed as he returned Jack’s kiss. He gently moved behind Jack’s still firm buttocks, but something was wrong! Jack pushed up against him, but Ennis couldn’t do it. He hung his head and silently cursed his aged body. Jack noticed his lover’s change in mood and turned to face him straight on.
“It’s alright, it’s alright!” Jack soothed as he cradled Ennis head in his leathery, age spotted hands. “Here, just lay on my chest, just like the old days." Jack soothed and rocked as Ennis settled in. "Listen, you don’t have to do anything, Cowboy. Just be with me!” Jack whispered. Ennis cuddled into his lover’s arms and wiped at the tears falling in a puddle on Jack’s chest. Jack rocked them both to a satisfied slumber.
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