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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Cameron:
Thank you so much, Susie!!! :)
Thank you M, fancy seeing you over here too. ;)
Marl
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 04:22:16 pm ---Littlewing, I can comfort you: I have it on paper. I can type it anew if you don´t have it! Not today, but I will post it in your name if that´s allright.
And yes, of course it´s me. Thank you! I sure would like to see a pic of yours! You have my email, if you feel like letting me know...
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This is for you, Dagi! Oh, and you, as well, Susie! Susie, thanks so much for saving this and sending it on to me. You're the best!
He held my hand. He didn’t want to let go. Did he sense that our time together on Brokeback was coming to an end? Jack Twist took my hand one day, led me over streams and through fields, my hand in his, his hand in mine. We washed our bodies and our clothes holding hands, cooked with hands intertwined, ate with our hands clasped. One time Jack Twist even brought my palm to his mouth, kissed it tenderly, but didn’t let go. There we stood, face to face, Jack kissing the front and the back of my hand. My hand in his, his hand in mine. These days I am always drawn back to that time, see the two us standing watching the sunset, standing there with clasped hands. My hand in his, his hand in mine.
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Susiebell on June 08, 2007, 07:51:21 pm ---This is one of my favourites from Jack with Ennis, hope you like it too
The Old Spark
“Gonna snow t’night for sure” Jack was looking up at the sky, thick black clouds looming overhead, air so cold it was sending out streams of mist with every breath. The two elderly men sat rocking on the porch swing, Jack’s hair white as snow, belly popping out over his jeans, Ennis bald but for a few fine wisps, still lean, although a little softer round the edges. They passed the Old Rose back and forth between them, enjoying the peace and quiet of the evening.
“Now this is what I call a sweet life, old friend” Jack commented, his voice a little deeper and huskier these days. “Less of the ‘old’ there bud! I may be 73 but I could still pin you down on this porch if I wanted to” Ennis chuckled, not sure his knees would survive the hard wooden boards. “I’d like to see you try” Jack retorted, starting a mock tussle, laughing and wheezing and giving up after five minutes.
“Maybe not” admitted Ennis. “Tell you what, Ennis Del Mar, you can pin me down any time you want!” Jack flashed him a sly grin, settling back down on the swing and taking another swig from the bottle. “Jack, I swear…” Ennis smiled, taking Jack’s hand and weaving their fingers together, bringing it up to his lips, kissing it softly and placing it onto his lap.
Susie xox 8)
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Ah, Susie, you've posted another of my favorites! I really thank the good people here for allowing us to share our fic! Susie, this reads even better the 2nd, 3rd time around. Lovely, lovely, lovely, as always! :)
Toycoon:
Yay! Littlewing1957, I love the chocolate syrup story! Hot, sweet and sticky!
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:56:52 pm ---Ennis gently spread Jack's thighs and very tenderly anointed his love with chocolate syrup
If I had been Ennis, I would have anointed myself with chocolate syrup :laugh: !
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Same here, Dagi! :laugh:
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