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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Toycoon:
Ennis is kinda pissed off; you know it ain't gonna end well!
You could always take the story in another direction, Miss Littlewing. You know I like it when you put your special spin on things!
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Toycoon on February 12, 2009, 11:09:32 pm ---Ennis is kinda pissed off; you know it ain't gonna end well!
You could always take the story in another direction, Miss Littlewing. You know I like it when you put your special spin on things!
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Funny you should say this, Love! I was just thinking about your fic and was wondering if I should add my own touch to it. You've given me permission, and I'll try to have the continuation up tomorrow!
Luvlylittlewing:
Ennis glanced down to the rope tightening around his broad shoulders, and then across to those laughing blue eyes. Jack’s azure orbs darkened a bit and danced as he tugged tight at the rope. Ennis stood very still as Jack pulled.
But Jack’s grip faltered when Ennis began to pull back. Ennis’ hazel eyes never left Jack’s blue ones as he grappled the rope from around his shoulders. Ennis’ mouth widened into a sly smile when he noticed how tightly Jack grasped his end of the rope. And with a mighty pull, Ennis fell to the ground, Jack falling right on top of him.
The wind was blown right from Ennis’ lungs as Jack’s full weight crushed him. But Ennis didn’t care. He looked into the face of his lover: a face twisted from shock, physical force, and yes, lust. Ennis pulled Jack closer atop him and cradled his head. “You okay, Rodeo?” He asked his lover in a voice both tender and playful. Jack nodded in the affirmative. “You surprised me, Friend,” Jack sputtered as Ennis cupped his face in his rough hewn hands. “I did, huhn?” Ennis laughed. Jack didn’t need to answer. One look at Ennis’ ripe, sensuous mouth and he was a goner. Jack opened his mouth wide and drew Ennis’ lips in. The kiss was so sweet that Ennis felt more winded than when Jack fell on top of him. The prospect of the job ending was forgotten.
Dobie1018:
Very nice Littlewing. I love reading about how in love the boys are with each other! Keep it up!
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Dobie1018 on February 18, 2009, 12:42:14 pm ---Very nice Littlewing. I love reading about how in love the boys are with each other! Keep it up!
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Thanks, Dobie! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'll certainly keep the stories coming, as time permits!
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