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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
gwyllion:
"Husband?" Squeee! That was a surprise!
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Gwyllion on May 19, 2009, 07:51:12 am ---"Husband?" Squeee! That was a surprise!
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Oh, yes! I've always thought of Ennis and Jack as a married couple. :)
Luvlylittlewing:
Jack was well fed and very satisfied with himself as he walked out into the cold November air. The restaurant was average, but managed to serve up a decent steak and lobster combination plate. Jack smiled as he pulled his collar up as an ineffectual buffer to the biting cold. He was very proud of himself, having treated Ennis to a good meal. He looked back at the door and noticed that Ennis didn’t follow him out. Jack headed back into the restaurant and looked around the dining room, but there was no Ennis.
Jack walked into the bar and had a look. Ennis wasn’t there, either, but when he turned to exit the bar, Jack almost ran headlong into Ennis Del Mar. “Whoa, there, Cowboy,” Ennis stated mildly, “where you been? I went outside to look for you but you were nowhere to be found." “I was out there for a minute, Friend, Jack answered, simply, “and I thought you were right in back of me, but it seems you never came out. “I had to go to the men’s room,” Ennis announced. “No big deal. Let’s go!” Jack nodded and followed Ennis to the door. “You better brace yourself for the cold, Friend,” Jack stated as they were making ready to go out. “It got real frigid all of a sudden.”
Ennis made a run for the truck. He was not unaccustomed to the cold, but the snap was sudden and it was unrelenting. Jack wasn’t far behind. He opened the passenger’s door for Ennis and ran around to the driver’s side. Once behind the wheel, Jack turned on the heater and shot Ennis a warm smile. “I know the cold is rough, Friend, but I have an idea how to keep you warm.” Ennis returned the smile. “I know you do, Rodeo, but before we get into something, you gotta tell me how you came to get this place of yours. How did you ever put something like this together?” Jack looked out ahead. “When we get back, I’ll tell you,” Jack finally spoke. “I’m good at secrets; I’ve even kept a few from you.” When Jack noticed the hurt and confusion in Ennis’ eyes, he was quick to respond. “No, no, nothing bad, Baby, but there are some things that I couldn’t tell you. There is a lot to fess up to…a lot to explain…”
Luvlylittlewing:
“I’m a bit afraid to hear you talk like this, Rodeo, and I’m not ashamed to admit it!” Ennis spoke softly and ran his fingers nervously through his sandy colored hair. Jack drove on in silence, but his blue eyes darted from the road to his lover. Ennis blew the air out of his lungs when he realized that Jack was at a loss for words. That Jack would be so quiet was very uncharacteristic and Ennis didn’t like it one bit. “I told you there is nothing bad, Friend,” Jack offered, humbly. “Just wait until we get back to the room and when you’re in my arms I’ll tell you.” “Sure enough,” was all that Ennis could think to answer. Jack directed his full attention back to the barren road.
Night had fallen, of course, and the sky was a dazzling canopy of stars. The air was crisp and frigid. Jack fished the keys to his lair out of his jacket pocket and poised it at the lock. He turned to Ennis with an imploring look. “You’re sure you want to come back here tonight? We could head up to the campsite and put up the tent.” Jack was speaking so softly and gently that Ennis almost couldn’t hear. “I can build a small fire and we can heat up some coffee and I have some good whiskey with me. What d’ya think?” Ennis managed a tiny smile. The thought of camping out was attractive, even in the bitter cold. But Ennis was anxious to hear one of Jack’s “secrets.” He knew he would have to put out to hear it, but making love to his man was not a hardship. “I would rather stay here for the night,” Ennis said, matter-of-factly. “I’m a bit too tired to set-up camp right now. I would rather lie out on those nice sheets you got in there.” Jack nodded without another word and opened the door.
The lovemaking was languid, slow and so tender that Ennis thought he would weep. He wondered if what Jack had been hiding was far more serious than he let on. Jack was being attentive and selfless, even more than usual, and that was saying a lot. Ennis wondered if the extra attention was borne of some sort of guilt, or perhaps Jack was simply more comfortable in his love “shack.” Jack pulled Ennis close and kissed his hair again. He traced tiny kisses along Ennis’ jaw line and sweetly kissed each of Ennis’ eyes. Ennis Del Mar was overcome. He sighed and wanted to hear what Jack promised to tell him. “You owe me a confession, Rodeo,” Ennis said, nervously. He steeled himself for what was to come. Jack pulled his lover even closer and spoke into his cheek: “His name is Cleet McBryde……"
Toycoon:
--- Quote from: Littlewing on June 09, 2009, 11:11:27 pm --- Jack pulled his lover even closer and spoke into his cheek: “His name is Cleet McBryde……"
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Uh-oh...
Hey there, Littlewing! It's been a long time. How is everything, baby?
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