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Human Interest and Two Crows Joy by MadLori
Penthesilea:
So soon? Wow.
Off to read ....
Brown Eyes:
I thought this was a particularly great update. Things just seem so complicated right now. And, it's so interesting to see that J & E's relationship has reached a really mature level in terms of looking out for one another and in working through emotional issues without really flying off the handle.
mariez:
--- Quote from: atz75 on July 25, 2008, 08:55:55 am ---I thought this was a particularly great update. Things just seem so complicated right now. And, it's so interesting to see that J & E's relationship has reached a really mature level in terms of looking out for one another and in working through emotional issues without really flying off the handle.
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Well said, Amanda. I agree. I'm proud of Jack for deciding to go to court with Ennis. I know how hard that will be for him. And I'm proud of Ennis, too. I think it may turn out to be one of his finest hours.
Marie
Brown Eyes:
Another thing I'd like to mention about this good update is that in this chapter I think Lori really, really nails the correct voices for Ennis and Jack in the dialogue passages. She's good at writing dialogue for them in general, but as I was reading this one it just kept striking me how right-on she was with some of their turns of phrases, etc. I could really hear the original Ennis and Jack talking that way.
Brown Eyes:
Hey Buds,
I feel like it's been quite a long time since we've heard from Lori. Has anyone heard any news about TCJ?
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