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Human Interest and Two Crows Joy by MadLori
ranchgal:
Shocked the bejeepers out of me with that one!! I too will be waiting on this next conversation.
I hope you are writing her as not as negative as I am feeling when I read that last paragraph or so.LOL
Can't help it---Just wonder what her problem is going to be???
They have about enough on their plates right now in the negative dept. LOL ;)
ranchgal:
AAAUUUGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P :( >:( :-X
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OH she was even worse---what exactly doesn't she understand about THOU SHALT NOT LIE!!
OMG---this is worse and worse
I love your writing of the hospital visit though that was a great one!! Perfect between Grace and Alma.
So glad you had jack fess up to Alma right away about FRancine--that lying little spoiled witch--even Ennis knew the truth over the phone. YYEEEWWWW
I certainly hope you have a vision to fix this--and get the boys back together soon.
MaineWriter:
Chapter 21 is up:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2841251/21/
Lori calls it: The Chapter Of Nothing but Intense Long Conversations That Nearly Killed the Author.
Enjoy!
Leslie
souxi:
--- Quote from: ranchgal on October 14, 2006, 11:58:13 am ---AAAUUUGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P :( >:( :-X
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OH she was even worse---what exactly doesn't she understand about THOU SHALT NOT LIE!!
OMG---this is worse and worse
I love your writing of the hospital visit though that was a great one!! Perfect between Grace and Alma.
So glad you had jack fess up to Alma right away about FRancine--that lying little spoiled witch--even Ennis knew the truth over the phone. YYEEEWWWW
I certainly hope you have a vision to fix this--and get the boys back together soon.
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Ranchgirl the thing is, Francine has obviously been brainwashed. She simply cant see that. As far as she,s concerned, she telling it like it is. Poor Jack really is the devil and he will burn in hell etc etc. She,s actually ill in a way, because she really beleives all this crap that this relgious cult or whatever they claim to be, are telling her. She,s very young and impressionable and vulnerable, and thats just the kind of people these weird cults exploit. God almighty if ever Jack and Ennis need to be together it,s now. Hope all this with his mum gets sorted out soon so he can get back to his man who needs him desperately. :'( :'( :'(
ranchgal:
I agree, they need an intervention, and to get her away from her reverend that is using Old Testament personalized BS to over-ride the more Christian New Testament views of forgiveness and love.
Can't believe how some thiings get started and ruin lives that way, lots of killing and destruction has been done in the name of religion---many different religions too.
I also agree---the boys need to be back together soon!! CAN'T be soon enough to suit me! LOL
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